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Why do You Deserve Me?
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 Created on 3-13-08
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"Why do you always do this to me?" I asked as he slapped me leaving a red welp on my face. "What do you mean! Why did you cheat on me you little slut!" He spat on my face the whiskey on his breathe was strong as if he drank a whole keg of it. "I didn't cheat on you!" I cried but alls i got in return was a punch in my stomach, making red blood come up for the strong punch. "Why did you have to change!" I yelled spitting blood on the white carpet. "Because you're a whore you changed me!" Jake yelled pushing me down on the shards of glass that layed spread out from when he last had an angry out break. "Now stay and here while i go get some more beer!" He yelled slamming the door as I sat there thinking why does he deserve me?
Ok this is just a tester tell me what you think about it if it gets good rating i will write more! thx ~Destiny~
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Please Login to post comments| On March 14th 2008 gusty13 Said : | |
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kmp |
| On March 13th 2008 seethrough3381 Said : | |
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Wow! I really like it. It's deep. KMP! |
| On March 13th 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said : | |
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i like it!!!!! kmp! |
| On March 13th 2008 feather1904 Said : | |
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plz R/R/R!! |
