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A Vampire's Luv Story 12
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 Created on 3-9-08
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“Nothing. Just we need to break up.” Clay said sounding unfriendly. “What? But you just said you loved me.” Kristie said quietly as she went out the door never to speak to him again. “Hey Kristie.” Cory said the next day when she went to school. “What’s wrong?” Cory asked as Kristie’s eyes glazed over. “Clay broke up with me.” Kristie said coldly as she gritted her teeth. “How is that bad?” Cory asked looking at her. “What do you mean?” Kristie asked looking at him, her tan face going pale. Did they already find out about him? Kristie thought as Cory started to talk. “Well… he’s just bad news. Last year his girlfriend was found dead in her room the day after she broke up with him.” Cory said as he drew in a breathe of fresh air. “What are you saying he murdered her?” Kristie asked suspiciously. “No I’m not saying anything just…” Cory’s trailed off as he ran away in fear of his live. “Cory!” Kristie yelled as she turned to see what had scared him off. “So you think I killed my girlfriend!?” Clay spat angrily as his eyes turned a dull, gray and glazed over. “No I didn’t say that!” Kristie said her gray-blue eyes widening in fear. “But you were thinking about it!” Clay snarled as he roughly grabbed her arm. “Clay you’re hurting me! Please let me go!” Kristie whined tears running down her cheeks. “Clay we are you taking me?!” Kristie asked through her muffled cries. “You’ll see when we get there!” Clay yelled making Kristie get into his car. “Get out now!!” Clay screamed loudly as he opened the door to an abandon building that smelt like gasoline. “Shut up and don’t say a word.” Clay said as he pulled her roughly to the chair tying up her tan, fragile arms with brown rope. “Clay don’t do this!” Kristie yelled as he got out a knife. “You know I have to.” Clay said the knife blade gleaming as he played with it. “But why?” Kristie whispered as he started coming toward her with the knife. “Because this is how I do things… plus if you die I will become king of Helves.” Clay said as he sliced her throat. Peaceful and satisfied he began to leave. “Oh wait now to dispose of the evidence.” Clay said loudly as he light a lighter and the place blew up as he silently left the burning heap of rubbish.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On March 10th 2008 lonely244444 Said : | |
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that bastard! |
| On March 10th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said : | |
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Oh crap!!!! Dude!!! Kepp me posted! |
| On March 9th 2008 Panda224 Said : | |
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KMP... It's going a bit fast... But other than that (and some random changes), it's good. :D KMP! |
| On March 9th 2008 musiclover2050 Said : | |
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omg kmpp! |
| On March 9th 2008 beachparty57 Said : | |
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Wow!! KMP!!!!!!!!!! |
| On March 9th 2008 C4444 Said : | |
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Fantastic!!! Now that's the story of the day for me.. Great job girl.. KMP.. :) |
| On March 9th 2008 XUnicorns4769X Said : | |
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WHOA! please kmp!! |
| On March 9th 2008 heathsgurl94 Said : | |
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oh my god! thats mean!!! please keep me posted!! |
| On March 9th 2008 icewillow13 Said : | |
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holy! omg! kmp |
| On March 9th 2008 dangg101 Said : | |
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Dang i dont like him any more kmp please the story is STILL amazing
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| On March 9th 2008 feather1904 Said : | |
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plz R/R/C! |
