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Looks Are'nt The Only Things That Kill [6]
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I was lulled to sleep by the sound of my guitar's tune. I wake up three hours later to find it's 7:00pm. Mom's not home yet from her job. She just spends so much time at the office, as a secretary for a very sucessful lawyer. I'm always alone to do whatever. Hell, she would'nt care if I went missing and never came back. But she was the last thing on my mind. Braden was the only thing buzzing throughout my head. He's like an addiction. I need to see him again. I guess you can like someone the second you meet them.
I had a wonderful dream about him. We were outside in the dark, the moonlight illuminating our sillhouettes. His eyes glow a frosty blue, and his lips a faint purple-pink. Our skin was so pale and white, it was blue-ish. He mouthed something I could'nt understand, and he leaned in and kisses me. we stood there for minutes, and then the fantasy stopped when I woke up.
I got up and went to the kitchen to get some food. I was sipping on a Coke until the phone disturbed my peace. I checked the caller ID. It was Allison. I pick it up and answer, "Hello? Allison?"
"Yea, Nikki. About today......" she started, "Do you know why we did'nt talk that much after class today?"
"Uhm, no....I don't." I answer coyly. "Well, it was because as soon as Mr. Hot Emo Guy walked in, yuo fell head over heels for him and hed your back to me the whole damn time. You did'nt even introduce me! So as soon as the bell rang, I sped outta there and left you alone the rest of the day. Now I know I sound like a bitch, but you really hurt me. I thought we would never let anything come between us...I thought---"
"ALLISON! Shut the fuck up! You did'nt have to ignore me the whole day because I was talking to a guy. I wanted to become friends with the dude, okay? I thought you can talk to him on your own damn time! So just calm down and keep your damn cool---" I interrupted her, but then she hung up on me. I was pissed. I tried dialing her back, but just goes to her voicemail. I slam the phone down and pound the counter. I storm off to my room and open up my diary. Then out of the corner of my eye, I see a little folded up piece of paper fall out of the last page. I pick it up and read it....
"Open your diary to the last page. And then call me.... -Braden"
I slowly turn chunks of pages to the very last one. There was a long note written to me in black and red pen. I lay down and read the scripture.....
"Nikki,
Even though I've known you ever since class, I felt really different about you. I already told you you were beautiful because it's true. You are the most beautiful girl I have ever stared at." My heart beated faster, and I blushed. I read on...."I love being your friend. But something is telling me to be something more than that. What I'm trying to tell you, is that I really really like you, Nikki. Would you please answer this question I'm about to ask you. Do you want to go out with me?"
My heart explodes again, and I scream at the top of my lungs. "Oh my God! Holy Shit!!!" I realize I'm being a comeplete weirdo. But hey, this the very first time someone has asked me out. I could'nt help myself. I pick up my phone and quickly dial his number.
"C'mon, c'mon!" I was anxiously waiting for him to pick up. Then I hear a scratchy "Hello?". "Braden?" I sat as calm as I can, retaining my total happiness. "My answer to your question. Is.......YES!" I exclaimed. "Oh, wow. Really?" he questioned me like he did'nt expect me to say yes. "Of course! I've felt the same way about you. I'm so glad you asked me." I explained to him. "Great. WEll, I guess I'll see you tomorrow, beautiful." I blushed. "Ok. Goodnight..." He hung up the phone, and I did too.
I giggled a little, and just alyed on my bed, carefree. Away from the world and all my problems. Who cares what happens now, I have Braden.
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| On January 21st 2008 alday4 Said : | |
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love it this story is the bomb diggidy like seriously, keep up the fantastic work! |
| On January 13th 2008 sealdog201 Said : | |
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nice story =]
it keeps getting better
and better
and better =]
you should go on and publish it when you're finished
i would buy the book all they way! |
| On January 12th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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this story gets better and better. i like how the diary plays a little role in the building blocks of the story. the little love triangle is also a nice touch |
| On January 10th 2008 xxhXcxx221 Said : | |
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Awww thats so sweet. I wish the guy i like did that. lol. kmp |


