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A letter to Robbie

Sorry

Creative Created on 11-16-07 Views(126) Story Rating G

The cool March air made me shiver as Mark and I walked arm in arm into the banquet hall. It was the night of my schools semi-formal dance, and Mark was my date. “At least we don’t have to wait in line this time,” he said. I was his date to his schools semi in November, and we waited for about twenty minutes until we were allowed to go inside.

After we went in, we had to wait for about a half hour to get our pictures taken. “How long do we have to wait?” Mark complained . He hadn’t stopped complaining since we got in line. He flipped open his phone - for about the hundredth time - to look at the time. I wouldn’t tell him how much this started to annoy me. Once we finally got our pictures taken, I found the table we were going to sit at with my friends. They all looked at Mark when we went to sit down. “He has nice eyes,” Tessa said.

“I know,” I replied with a girlish giggle.

Dinner went well, except for the fact that Mark kept obsessively looking at his phone. Once we were all finished, we were allowed to go on the dance floor. I wasn’t the best dancer, but at least I didn’t fall. We started to inch towards the front where most of the people were dancing. We were jumping up and down to one of the songs when Mark heard someone call his name. A tall, blond girl came running over and gave Mark a big hug. “I haven’t seen you in so long,” the girl squealed.

“It’s so great to see you!” he replied. “Tiffany this is Maggie.” He spun me around, and Tiffany waved and said hi. I did the same, and then Mark spun me back around. Then just like that the pair walked off the dance floor and into the front room.

I stood on the dance floor dazed, not comprehending what just happened. Mark and I weren’t exactly a couple, but seeing him walk away with that girl tore my heart to pieces. I danced a little with my friends, but I just wanted to go home and be alone. That’s always the way I tried to handle things by being all alone up in my room. I can think better when I’m alone. Right now with all the noise and all the people, I could barely hear my thoughts. I sat down and stared out at the dance floor. A slow song came on and I was definitely in no mood to dance. I saw him dancing with her and closed my eyes. I didn’t want to see anymore.

When the dance was almost over he came to me to try to explain, but even though he talked a lot, he never apologized. I couldn’t take it anymore. I ran to the bathroom with tears streaming down my face. I sat in a stall crying until I could hear that I was alone. I didn’t want people to see me. I got out, and stared at my face in the mirror. My eyes were red and puffy, and my face was blotchy and tear stained. I cleaned myself up as best as I could, and walked back to our table where he was waiting for me.

It’s been nine months since it happened, but it still hurts. I’ve barely spoken to him since then. He thinks I’ve forgiven him, but I’ve never even said anything about it to him. He’s trying to win me back, but he’s failing miserably. This time I won’t be stupid. I’m a lot stronger now, but I still wish he would just say he was sorry.

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On December 10th 2007 heaven1blessed Said :
heaven1blessed what a asshole, i hate it wen girls cry over dumbshits, its pretty good tho, well written. :)
On November 19th 2007 darkfairee14 Said :
darkfairee14 oh yea it does sound familiar.SEMI!!!!!!!!!That dude is a great big pile of asshole.I agree with sam on this one,but in my own words.......TEAR HIM A NEW ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!!
On November 18th 2007 edwardlover92 Said :
edwardlover92 this is only a one time thing, I know its short, but its not going to be a series, because the rest of the story is not really interesting
On November 18th 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 This is good Marnie! You need to kick his ass though...or we'll do it for you...you know who "WE" are. Seriously you need to tell him off...or can I grab my pitchfork?? Lol.
On November 17th 2007 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 very good i like it
On November 17th 2007 spazzattacks76 Said :
spazzattacks76 I LOVE IT!
:D
On November 17th 2007 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 that is really good...i loved it...
On November 16th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Love it!
On November 16th 2007 loveXafterXall Said :
loveXafterXall How could he do that to her?!? I love it! puh-leeza keep me posted!
On November 16th 2007 amptone Said :
amptone very nice
On November 16th 2007 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen if you're going to write more please keep me posted
On November 16th 2007 cashy31196 Said :
cashy31196 oh wow. its great
On November 16th 2007 edwardlover92 Said :
edwardlover92 I wrote this for my creative writing class