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A Thread of Lives (I)

Tragedy Created on 8-21-07 Views(224) Story Rating G

I

 

Waking up I see that everything is OK
The first time in my life and now it's so great
Slowing down I look around and I am so amazed
I think about the little things that make life great

I wouldn't change a thing about it
This is the best feeling

[Chorus]
This innocence is brilliant
I hope that it will stay
This moment is perfect
Please don't go away
I need you now
And I'll hold on to it
Don't you let it pass you by

I found a place so safe, not a single tear
The first time in my life and now it's so clear
Feel calm, I belong, I'm so happy here
It's so strong and now I let myself be sincere

I wouldn't change a thing about it
This is the best feeling

[Chorus]

It's a state of bliss, you think you're dreaming
It's the happiness inside that you're feeling
It's so beautiful it makes you wanna cry
It's a state of bliss, you think you're dreaming
It's the happiness inside that you're feeling
It's so beautiful it makes you wanna cry

It's so beautiful it makes you wanna cry
This innocence is brilliant
Makes you wanna cry
This innocence is brilliance
Please don't go away
Cause I need you now
And I'll hold on to it
Don't you let it pass you by

[Chorus]

 

Innocence – Avril Lavigne

 

Monday March 31st,  3:33am. Highway 15.

 

A blue Ford Focus drives well above speed limit, zigzagging along the road.  The night is pitch black and nothing lights the way. The highway is bumpy, with dangerous crevices. Why ? Because it’s a country highway. And what does that change ? People rarely use it, so why spend money to secure it ? The driver fumbles around the buttons and handles in his car to turn on his lights. HONK. Wrong one. SWISH SWISH. Wrong one. CLICK CLICK CLICK. Wrong one yet again. What is taking him so long ? IT IS 3.33am. DRIVE SAFELY WITH 102.9 K-MAZON. The radio shouts out the newest hits, deafening the driver. He’s alone. Taking his eyes off the road, he looks at his steering wheel and finds the right handle. CLICK CLICK. The brusque change in light blinds him and he quickly looks away from the source. Finally accustomed, he looks out again. Too late. He didn’t hear it coming because of the deafening radio. Too late. He didn’t see it coming because of the blinding light. Too late. Too late. The car opposite him, a red and black Mini Cooper, honks desperately. But the car won’t slow down. And it won’t drive straight. They’re going to hit. In a flash, the Ford Focus sees the Mini Cooper. Both cars sway, hit. The radio shuts off. The light bulbs are destroyed. Smoke slowly rises from the motors. Nothing moves.

Was it bad luck ? Was it bad timing ? Could it have been prevented ? Who knows.

 

3.35am.

 A truck transporting bottles of milk to be delivered in an hour to the nearest supermarkets heads down the road. He sings to the radio, the same as the driver in the blue Ford Focus. Simple coincidence ? He has a great day ahead of him. He’s getting promoted. Nothing can ruin it. His eyes are on the road, but he knows he won’t meet anyone. Nobody ever uses it. Only a deer or two. There’s an obstacle some feet ahead of him. He squints and tries to distinguish it but can’t. Still he slows down. And approaches. He notices a car. No, two cars. The front of the blue Ford Focus is completely destroyed. The left side of the red and black Mini Cooper is non-existent. A curtain of smoke envelops the wreckage. The truck stops. The driver steps out. His mouth is wide open. Taking his mobile out of the back pocket of his jeans, he dials 911. 911 may I help you ?Ye-es. Highway 15 headed towards Kenninsburg. After exit 3. Ther-there’s a two car accident. T-terrible st-state. I c-can’t hear anything. We’ll be right over. Please stay near the vehicles.  If you see any movement, or hear anything, try to comfort the passengers. Or talk to them anyway.I c-can’t see anything. T-to much sm-smoke.We’ll be right over.

The driver backs and looks to the other side. Why won’t he try to see if there aren’t any survivors ? Cowardice ? Disgust ? Fear ?Yes, it is fear. But not fear of blood, not fear of death. Fear of the past. Tears silently roll down his weathered face. He remembers vividly. He was 8. His mother was looking at him. Singing to the radio. Laughing. Then there was a flash. Then nothing. He unconsciously rubs his wooden left leg. He lost it in the accident. He lost his mother in the accident. Simple coincidence ? Irony ?

 

3.47am

 

A siren. The truck driver dries his face. Blazing red and blue lights head towards him. The police is there, too. The ambulance and the cop car stop. While some head toward the wreckage, others head toward the truck driver. Can we ask you a few questions ? 

I guess.Where you there when the cars hit ?

No. It had already happened. And I haven’t done anything wrong either. He added at the policeman’s searching look.

Of course not. Did you hear anything when you arrived to the place ?No. The radio was on. So when you arrived the cars were already in such a state.

Yes ! Look, buddy, I was driving my truck to Little’s Supers and I saw the wreckage ! How many times do I have to say it ? Damn it, I’m gonna be late for my delivery. I was to be promoted ! The truck driver grunts and eyes the policeman who frowns.

I’m very sorry, sir, but you will need to follow us to the station. For a report you see.WHAT ?!

Please call your company to explain, sir. The policeman is clearly aggravated. He wished he hadn’t had a late shift. He would’ve been able to watch the game. He was tired, impatient. He wished he wasn’t here. This man was taking up all of his time. And he clearly wasn’t very polite. 

The driver fumes and calls. He yells on the phone. Yet nothing can be done. He won’t be promoted. His day is ruined. Irony ?

 

The emergency doctors enter the ring of smoke and look for passengers. They lift pieces of metal. Put them aside. The driver of the blue Ford Focus is found. He is sprawled against the windshield, glass eating at his skin. He wasn’t wearing his seat belt. The doctors carefully pick him up. He’s in a terrible shape. And bleeding to death. His skull is cracked, his ribs smashed, one of his arms is oddly twisted. The doctors check for signs of life. His heart is beating feebly. He’s breathing with difficulty. Yet he won’t come around. He’s been knocked out cold. The doctors fear traumatism may have plunged him in a coma. He is put on a stretcher, into the ambulance.

Next, the doctors unbury the driver of the red and black Mini Cooper. The left door was crushed against her body. Her left side is deeply cut. Even though she was wearing a seat belt. Her arms broke because she held the steering wheel. The doctors check her pulse. Feeble. Check her breathing. Difficult. They try to reanimate her. She opens her eyes a moment. Mumbles something incomprehensible. Faints again. She too is put on a stretcher, into the ambulance.

Well, what ya think ?The Ford Focus clearly ‘it the Mini Coo’er. We checked his alco’ol index. He ‘ad a glass too much. Poor guy, prolly in ‘is twenties. Dunno wot brought ‘im ‘ere. As for the girl, she be a nurse. I found ‘er uniform in the passenger seat. She musta been ‘round ‘is age.

Don’t talk like that. She’s still alive. We better make a report and bring them quickly to the hospital. The guy’s responsible, then ? The driver scratches a few notes down. He nods at a policeman. They’ll be staying a while longer. The truck driver has gone to the station. His trucked is parked to the side. Today, families will wake up with no milk on their doorstep. All because of an accident on Highway 15. The ambulance leaves for the hospital. Lights flashing. Siren bawling.

 

The girl on the stretcher never asked for anything. Her life was innocent. Empty. With nothing to worry about. Now it’s about to change. And so is the boy’s. And so is everybody elses. No life is ever to be the same.

 

Earindle

Copyright ©2007 Earindle

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On September 25th 2007 sadee309 Said :
sadee309 wow wonderful.. i like that it is written in present tense.. gives it a "feel" lol
On August 24th 2007 TheBestFlash Said :
TheBestFlash Very nice. Just wondering why it's in present tense... It seems like it would work better in past tense. Also, and this isn't anything major, but there seems to be a lot of short sentences... Some could be joined together... "The driver scratched a few notes down and nodded at a policeman. They’d be staying a while longer." But other than that I like it. Very nicely written...
On August 24th 2007 rain2teardrops Said :
rain2teardrops I like it. It sparks of something interesting.
On August 22nd 2007 bobwobbly Said :
bobwobbly fact: people in this century don't have wooden legs. They're typically made of plastic. just a little tidbit to make your story more credible. also, why would the police officer be missing a game at 3:30 in the morning. who has a game on at that unholy hour? other than those little, tidy bits, it was really good. The story line is good and it is well executed, good description. well done.
On August 21st 2007 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 Haha, I mean when you write more...
On August 21st 2007 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 Really good, I like how you started the chapter. Very intrigued! :D Keep me posted when you right more.
On August 21st 2007 angelalone Said :
angelalone i like it. sounds all too familiar...like my life. made me wonder....