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VampiricDecisions PART 2

Romance Created on 2-16-08 Views(79) Story Rating G

VampiricDecisions  

part two by dianna blair

     Alastor made his way towards me.I smirked as he reached for

my hand and pulled me up to his level."Lets dancce."He said in his

melodramatic toned voice.I forced a smile."Okay."Then only so

he could hear I snarled quickly."But ONLY one dance."

       We made our way to the middle of the dancing coven

 members. As they regained there forms we started to dance.

 "WHY do insist on being so difficult my sweet?"He cooed as we

swayed around the floor.He continued before I could speak."Just

admit you love me and i'll take you."He whispered into my ear in

what I guessed would have been a seductive tone, to the

 others.No to me it didnt sound sexy it sounded dry.To me it had

no feeling.The song ended and and I pushed away from him as

fast as I could."No thanks I'd rather keep those feelings,to

 myself."I hiss in his ear and saunter off to sit with my closest

 friend Seline. 

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       "He's still tryin ta get your venom.eay?"Seline giggles."GOD! I

wish you would realize how many of the others would KILL to be

you!!You are so lucky."She sighs and gets a look in her eyes.I

 growl in disgust."EW! Seline! please keep those damn fantasies

quiet!!Do you forget I can hear you!!" I roll my eyes.Seline

blushes brightly in contrast with her pale skin and mumbles out a

 small;"sorrie."Some vampires like me gained extra powers when

we got changed.I got special hearing.I HATED it. I could always

hear EVERYTHING.I especially hated it around Alastor. Seline looks

 at me."Is it Hard??...your..power? Do you wish you didnt

 have it?"I looked at her and sighed.It was odd for her to act so 

concerned. "Only when its something I had ABSOLUTELY no

intention of hearing.....SO only MOST of the time."I smiled to

 Seline to let her know I was joking.She laughs and gets up."Your

HILARIOUS.Im going hunting.Wanna go?"I jump up."OF COURSE!" 

 I smile fangs bared.

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       ok so this is my new story.its called VampiricDecisions.plz comment and rate i worked REALLY HARD and its almost done in my notebook ill keep postin until noone asks for it.

       AT 5 ILL PUT UP PART 2!!!! 

THANX!!!!

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On March 15th 2008 CaPlanePourToi Said :
CaPlanePourToi This is, as I said, a really interesting story. When your characters are speaking, I suggest you make a new paragraph. It's just a personal preference, but I feel it's a lot easier to read. Ex:
"Hello, Ted."
"Hello Bob," I replied. I hated that guy. Always letting his dog on my lawn.
"So, what's up?".....etc.

It's very very cool, and easy to picture in my mind. The only thing I find unbelievable is a vampire talking like a teenager. Keep me posted.
On February 16th 2008 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 Please keep me posted! this seems interesting.