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Hello Brooklyn:Pt. 9

Creative Created on 4-17-08 Views(124) Story Rating G

We kept kissing.Then I put my head up and tried looked Javail in the face.But he kept kissing my neck.

Brooklyn:Javail.

Javail:Hmm.

He said not stopping.

Brooklyn:JAVAIL!

Javail:What?!?

Brooklyn:We need to slow down.I mean we don't even go out.

Javail:We can though.

He started kissing my neck again.

Brooklyn:JA-VAIL!

Javail:What?!?

Brooklyn:Did you hear a word I said and actually thought about it?

Javail:What you say?

I got up off of him.

Javail:What's wrong?

Brooklyn:Are you just tryin' to hit?

Javail:No.

Brooklyn:Javail,you was kissing me not hearing a word I said.Like I said if we are goin' out I'm not takin' it that fast.

Javail:We've known each other for years.What's the problem?

Brooklyn:Havin' sex on the first day.Yeah, dat's sleezy.

Javail:Aight,how about tomorrow.

I glared at him.

Javail:Just playin.

He stood next to me and crossed his arms.

Javail:So what we gon' do?

I looked up at him and smiled.

Brooklyn:Um... come here.

I grabbed his wrist and we sat next to each other on the couch.

Brooklyn:Now look,I was goin' to take Curtis to Atlanta so we could try to fulfill our dreams.But it seems like dats outa da question.So I want someone to come with me.

Javail:You askin' me to come?

Brooklyn:Yeah,you is one of da best rappers 'round here and-

Javail:You mean I am da best rapper.

Brooklyn:Booooyyy I wouldn't say all dat.Cause I'll murder ya.Like what is you sayin'?

I laughed.

Brooklyn:So what do ya say?

Javail:Hell yeah!Dat's a good opportunity.

I hugged him and we kissed.

*One year later*

Of course Javail and I went to Atlanta and was underground rapping.I also sung on some of our songs.We was great for some underground rapping.Our names were Brooklyn and Vail.We couldn't think of no better.

And guess what.....we were doin' a song with Lil Wayne!And we did a song with Kanye West and Soulja Boy.We were doin' it big living lavish I'm tellin ya'.We even had gigs!I was so excited!We traveled a lot of places.And we were even known around everywhere.

We went to clubs and got in VIP.I got to meet Chris Brown,Ciara,Bow Wow,T-Pain and so much more.I never thought my dreams would ever turn into reality.And even though I was supposed to hate him I had to thank Curtis.He inspired to do this.Even though now I did more singing than rapping.

We had a gig in Brooklyn.But when we got there it was canceled 'cause all the snow.The place we were doing it at was like frozen.And it would take days to get that place warm so we turned it into next week.But we decided to visit the hood.

People clapped when we stepped out the Hummer we were in.They gave us fives and pats on the shoulders.I couldn't help but grin.I seen Alexis way in the back tryin' to get through.

Brooklyn:Ay!Let me through!

I went through the crowd and reached her.I gave her a hug.

Alexis:Congrats!Girl you doin' it!

Brooklyn:Thank you!You seen Curtis?Do he still go out wit Adrianna?Did he move?Did she have the baby?

Alexis:Wait!!!They haven't gone anywhere.But dey did break up.I don't know why.She did have da baby and it's cute!

I nodded.I walked down the street by myself even though people followed me.I went to his apartment.I waved to the crowd showing them they can't come in.They clapped again and started to walk away.I went to his house and knocked on the door.Curtis opened the door.He looked really gloomy and he had a cut over his eye.

Brooklyn:Hi.

Curtis:Hey.

It was silent for a moment.

Brooklyn:Can I...come in?

He stepped aside.And closed the door after me.

Brooklyn:Look I came to say thank you.You inspired me to be what I became so thanks.

Curtis:You're welcome and congrats.Wish I could be wit you.

I smiled.

Brooklyn:You still can if you like.

He smile and nodded.

Brooklyn:By the way.I heard about you and Adrianna.Sorry.

Curtis:So you know what she did to me.

I was guessing it had something to do with that cut above his eye.

Brooklyn:I don't know why.But sorry.Congradulations on the baby though.

He shook his head.

Curtis:That's just it.It's not mine.

Brooklyn:Oh my gosh!I'm so sorry.

Curtis:That ain't it.

Brooklyn:You know who it is don't you?

Curtis nodded.

Brooklyn:Who?

It was silent for a moment.He swallowed and said...

Curtis:David.

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