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Age Aint Nothing But A Number '6'

Hello Brooklyn Pt.8

Creative Created on 4-1-08 Views(125) Story Rating G

I drove out of the lot and into the street leaving Curtis and Adrianna.

Javail:You ok?

Brooklyn:Yeah.

David:What happened back there anyway?

Javail:Dude is retarded.He put that dumb hoe before his best friend he had for years.How can you do dat?

I stopped at a redlight and looked out the window trying to hide my sadness.

Javail:Then he hit her!

David:Hit who?

Javail:Brooklyn.

Brooklyn:You know what,I don't even care.He's a fuckin' idiot dats all.

I started driving when the light turned green.

David:You know what?I ain't even hungry no mo' so just take me home.

I turned a corner and headed for David's house.We dropped him off and I went on driving.

Curtis:You can take me home.

Brooklyn:I don't wanna be alone so can you just come with me to my house and I'll take you home later?

He looked unsure at me.

Brooklyn:Please?

I batted my eyelashes and tried to look as innocent as possible.He smiled.

Javail:Yeah,aight.

I grinned and headed back to my place.

*My place*

Javail had the same expression as Curtis did when he seen the bug building.

Javail:This is huge!

Brooklyn:I know.Come on.

We went to the floor I stayed on I unlocked the door and it flew open.

Brooklyn:You can sit down if you want.

He did so.I went and grabbed some sodas.When I put my head up all I seen was Javail looking at my lyrocs that were sitting on the table.He nodded in approval but I was still kinda embarrased and annoyed.I went to where he was and snatched the papers from him.

Brooklyn:What are you doin?You dont just grab people stuff.It could be confidential.

He chuckled.

Javail:Calm down!My bad.I liked it you dont have to be mad though.

Brooklyn:I know.It's all this drama with Curtis and Adrianna and I just-

Javail:Ay!Forget dem aight.Dont let them get to you.Come here.

I went into his arms.He held me for a moment.I lifted my head and softly kissed him on the lips.Next thing I know we're both laying on the couch.Me on top of him.

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