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Creative Created on 3-23-08 Views(170) Story Rating G

I know what you're thinking.'Evergreene?What was her great-grandmother thinking?'Well they're family is like half Indian.That would explain Shanaya's long hair and  perfectly tan skin,but she spoke like a southern african-american.

"Where's that?"Malik asked.

"It's not too far"Shanaya said.

"I hope not.Because we aint got too much gas."

Shanaya looked at the gas thing and it was like 3 centimeters away from E.

"Shit!"Shanya whispered hitting her leg."You ain't got no money?"

"Only 5 dollars."

Shanya sighed frustrated."Well put it in the tank."

Malik stared at her for minute."Shanaya."

She turned her head towards him."We gon' be alright,O.K.?"

He put his hand on her shoulder.She smiled a little bit and whispered "I know."

He turned back around facing the front and started the car.He pulled off the curb and into the street.

*Grandma Evergreene's house.*

They stopped the car right in front of her driveway.He turned off the car.Shanaya grabbed Cassie's carseat from the backseat.

"I'll be right back.Wait about 10 minutes,O.K.?"She said staring at Malik.He nodded.She tightened her grip on the handle of the carseat and walked to the front porch.

She slowly knocked.She heard a little voice call."Come in."She walked in and there on the couch.She looked a little pale and sick.But when she saw Shanaya her face brightened with joy.

"That's my baby girl."She looked down at Cassie."And she got the baby baby girl."She smiled with delight.She softly touched Cassie's cheek as Cassie still snored.Cassie winced but stayed sound asleep.

"Hi Grandma."She hugged her and stayed in her arms for about one minute.

"You're so warm.Are you angry or sad?Is anything wrong?"

"No."

Grandma Evergreene stared at her.That was the weird thing.Even by the smallest touch or move or sound you make she know how you feel or if anything's on your mind.And she knew how to get them out.

"Grandma might of played dumb but she ain't never been no fool."

"You been listenin' to Plies huh on 'Dey Know Remix.'You still got my CD I made you?"

"Yup.But let us not change the subject and say what is on your mind child."

Shanaya knew she might as well.When her grandma don't use abbreviations she mean business.Shanaya once again let out a long sigh.

"Mama kicked me out with no money."

It was silent for a minute.Then Grandma Evergreene started coughing.She sat up.It sounded as if she was going to cough up a lung.Shanaya quickly patted her back.

"You alright."

Grandma Evergreene began to wheeze.Then she finally caught her breath."You gotta make up with your mama honey."

"I can't.I didn't even do anything this time and she threw me out on da street.Why can't I just stay here?"

Her grandmother shook her head."I got a cough way too bad for you or the baby to be around.Sit here."She patted next to her.Shanaya sat."Now baby I got pneumonia and I can't have you guys around me like that."

Shanaya stopped breathing.She could hardly catch her breath.Grandma Evergreene started hitting her back.

"Child are you ok?"

Shanaya let out a breath.Tear started to stroll down her cheeks.Her grandma embraced her.

"There,there my child."The stroked her hair.

"Why?!?"Shanaya sobbed."How?!?"

"I went to the doctor baby."

"They could be wrong!"

"Baby,I doubt it.They wouldn't make that mistake.Look at me my love."

She grabbed Shanaya's chin.She slowly wiped her tears away.

"Even if I do go,I will always be here,"She pointed to Shanya's head,"and here."And she pointed to Shanaya's heart."Now you keep your head up and go make up with your mom.Life is way too short for this mess O.K."

Shanya nodded.Grandma kissed the tip of her fingers and put them on her forehead.She did the same to Cassie.

"Now go my love."

Shanaya grabbed the carseat and blew a kiss to her grandma and she left.

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On July 18th 2008 Koraney Said :
Koraney fis is awes i thought i already commented lolz oh well dis is great plz kmp
On March 26th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x aww... but where will Shanaya go now? plz kmp!
On March 25th 2008 13sweetcheeks Said :
13sweetcheeks aawwww...but wat is she is going to do now??
On March 24th 2008 lillex64 Said :
lillex64 aww, I love it... Kmp, I got an idea what's gonna happen next, her grandma is going to die, but she leaves most of her money and stuff to Shanaya... And she lives a better life because.
On March 24th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz keep me posted! its great.
On March 24th 2008 PorshaS Said :
PorshaS aww kmp!!!
On March 24th 2008 fawzia11 Said :
fawzia11 kmp
On March 24th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
PunkRockNerdxX Great story. Please keep me posted!
On March 23rd 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 HEEHEE GREAT J0B. PLEASE KMP.
*J*
On March 23rd 2008 ALIYAH1994 Said :
ALIYAH1994 awww, so sweet. plz kmp
On March 23rd 2008 justthegirlxox Said :
justthegirlxox kmp please.
On March 23rd 2008 lonely244444 Said :
lonely244444 KMP please!
On March 23rd 2008 jaylynn142434 Said :
jaylynn142434 i love this story! kmp please!
On March 23rd 2008 oxXxlovelyxXxo Said :
oxXxlovelyxXxo aww thats cute how da grandma started singin to Plies. damn he has a sexi as voice! but nice story kmp.
On March 23rd 2008 jessi9509runit Said :
jessi9509runit i really liked it...kmp
On March 23rd 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex kmp
On March 23rd 2008 Koraney Said :
Koraney DIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY AND IT HAS SO MANY MORALS TO IT PLZ KEEP ME POSTED AND KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK