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My Superman Is A Gansta Pt. 2 Chpt. 12

Hello Brooklyn:Pt. 6

Creative Created on 3-1-08 Views(126) Story Rating G

Adrianna was bout to swing but Curtis grabbed her arm and Javail grabbed mine.

Curtis:Y'all chill.

Adrianna:Naw she want a beat down lets let her have it.

I snatched my arm away from Javail.

Brooklyn:Now I aint got no disrespect for yo girl,Curtis.But she aint gon keep dissin me,ya dig?

Curtis:Hold on now you disrespected her too so dont put it all on her.

Javail:Yeah but she stood up first!

Curtis:Who asked for your opinion?

Javail:Boy dont get heated wit me.

Then a guy with a tie ans stuff came out.It was the manager,Mr. Martinez.He was talkin spanish then he came up to our table.

Mr. Martinez:If you guys are gonna fight you better...Brooklyn!You're back!

He spread his arms and we hugged.

Mr. Martinez:You're all grown up!

Brooklyn:It's only been a year.

I giggled.

Mr. Martinez:And it seemed so much more.

I giggled.

Mr. Martinez:But what seems to be the problem?

Brooklyn:It's nothin,just a lil argument.We bout to leave though.

Just then the lady from the counter gave us our food.

Lady:Y'all have a good day.

All:You too.

We left and basically decided to have the argument outside because everyone started talkin at the same time.

Brooklyn:You know,you are such a bitch!You tryin to flex Curtis and make me jealous,but it aint waorkin so you can just stop,aight?

Curtis:Chill Brooklyn.Aint nobody even tryin to do dat.

Javail:Yeah right.

Adrianna:I aint so yall can shut yall mouths.

Brooklyn:Make us shut up!

Curtis:Yo bag back Brooklyn!

Adrianna:Yeah,now why would you try to fight the momma of yo best friend's baby.

All eyes fell on her.

Curtis:What?!?

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On March 7th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 Whoah, snap! kmp
On March 3rd 2008 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz WHAT??! O.O! that cant be possible! well, it can.. but... IT CANT BE POSSIBLE!! please keep me posted!
On March 3rd 2008 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 Damn. What the hell happened there? You def. gotta keep me posted.
On March 2nd 2008 missin0you0ada Said :
missin0you0ada what?? oo kmp this is gettin reall good
On March 2nd 2008 jjsmomm682006 Said :
jjsmomm682006 snap that is getting good.
On March 2nd 2008 ALIYAH1994 Said :
ALIYAH1994 what...omg...plz keep me posted
On March 1st 2008 Koraney Said :
Koraney omg dat was awesome pla pla keep me poted
On March 1st 2008 lovin5life Said :
lovin5life wat???que pasa?>>kmp
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oxXxlovelyxXxo *dramatic music plays* damn, thats messed up lol keep me posted
On March 1st 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 say wha?? kmpp!
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