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Hello Brooklyn Pt:5

Creative Created on 2-24-08 Views(145) Story Rating G

Author's note:Umm.. at the beginning of the story...i'm such an idiot lol...but Adrianna's name was actually Andrea!lol!i looked back and found dat out!haha!lol but we gon' make her name Adrianna cause I dont wanna keep forgettin.lol.Enjoy!

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We were finally at Tino's.The drive was silent except for the radio.It was alot of tension.Before,I looked in the rear-view mirror and looked at Curtis who was glaring at Javail.Could there be jealousy here?I had shrugged that off and kept on to Tino's.Now we were here.

Brooklyn:Aight let's go!

We got out and went inside.Javail held onto me by the waist.Curtis looked at us kinda nervous like and did the same to Adrianna.I lifted my eyebrow in amusement.We went to the front.And the lady came to the counter.

Lady:Can I help y'all?

Brooklyn:I'll have a cheeseburger with bacon.

Adrianna laughed under her breath.I looked at her.

Brooklyn:I fail to see what's funny.

Adrianna:Nothin.Just a thought came up.

I rolled my eyes and decided to brush it off.

Brooklyn:Anyway,oh and I'll have a soda please.

Lady:And y'all?

Javail:I'll have what she have.Except make dat a hamburger.

Curtis:I'll have some hotwings.

Adrianna:Do y'all have a salad?

We all,including Curtis,looked at her as if she was out of her mind.Even the employee raised her eyebrows.

Lady:The closest thing we got to that is coslaw.(Author's note:I dont know how you spell it so if you dont know what I'm talkin bout,sorry)

Adrianna:Oh.Well can I have that?

Lady:That would be $12.57.

I paid and she gave me my change.We went to find a table.

Javail:So Brooklyn.Where did you go again?

Brooklyn:Atlanta.

Javail:How was dat?

Brooklyn:It was cool but I missed Brooklyn.

Javail:We missed you too.

I laughed.Adrianna coughed.I knew she was tryin to get somebody's attention.

Adrianna:Well I think Atlanta's cool.

Brooklyn:I know.

Adrianna:Well you act as if Brooklyn's better.

Curtis tapped Adrianna on the shoulder.She turned her head towards him.

Curtis:Enough about that,when did you eat salads.Last time I took you out to a restaraunt you ordered the whole left side of the menu.

I kept myself from laughing.So did Javail.Adrianna looked offened.

Adrianna:Well I decided to go on a diet.

Brooklyn:Sounds like somebody made dat up.

She looked at me.

Adrianna:Excuse me?

Brooklyn:You frontin fo no reason you just tryin to look like you aint fat dats all.And why in da hell did you try to laugh in line when I ordered me stuff?Oh I was just askin?

Curtis:Brooklyn!

Javail:Yall aight?

Brooklyn:Im cool.

Adrianna:Im not.you can quit tryin to catch a attitude.

Brooklyn:Oh my gosh!Look who talkin!

Javail:Calm down Brooklyn.

Adrianna:Naw she aint gotta calm down.She been tryin to make me mad ever since she came up here and Im tired of it!

She stood up.

Adrianna:And I want her to swing.

I stood up.

Brooklyn:Bitch boss up then!

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Tell meh what yall think.Sorry I didnt get to write last weekend.I was reeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaalllll sick!Hope you enjoyed.

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On March 2nd 2008 jjsmomm682006 Said :
jjsmomm682006 i love it. Keep me posted.
On March 1st 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 damn i gues...are they gnna fade in da resteruant? KMPP!
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On February 25th 2008 oxXxlovelyxXxo Said :
oxXxlovelyxXxo omg please keep me posted and please please please post the next part of VIP!!! please...lol.
On February 25th 2008 lovin5life Said :
lovin5life kmp
On February 24th 2008 ALIYAH1994 Said :
ALIYAH1994 oh shit!!! lol...i qotta noe wats qonna happen next. plz kmp!!!
On February 24th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz i hope your better now so you can write alot moreeeeeeeeee!!! lol im jk. this chapter was great. they gonna fight? keep me posted pleasee!
On February 24th 2008 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 Haha, Brooklyn should kick her ass! Good goin! kmp?
On February 24th 2008 missin0you0ada Said :
missin0you0ada love it kmp please thanks:]
On February 24th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 Yay! I love it. This story just gets better and better. Please!! KMP :)
On February 24th 2008 Koraney Said :
Koraney OMG DAT IS AWESOME I LOVED IT PLZ PLZ KEEP ME POSTED