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Hello Brooklyn:Part 1

Creative Created on 1-22-08 Views(133) Story Rating G

We chatted as we walked around the corner to get to my car.

Curtis:You da only person dat would park your car around da corner just to walk in da snow.

I giggled.

Brooklyn:You know me.

He chuckled and got in on the passenger side.I turned the car on and turned up the heat.Then I turned to my favorite Hip-hop and R&b station 100.7.Author's note:Yeah if your from Brooklyn and it's different im sorry but dat our hip-hop station and i dont know yall's lol.

I pulled off the curb and started goin north.

Curtis:Dang you still remember where he live huh?

Brooklyn:Like Lil Wayne said "I'll forget a lot of thangs but I will not forget the streets."

He smirked.

Curtis:Still got yo lil rhythm when you rap huh?

Brooklyn:Yeah dats why we goin to David's house.

Curtis:Aight.

We rode til we got to a lil house.It was actually a two bed room house.But for David to be now living by himself dat was good enough.I parked my car in the front of the house.We got out and knocked on the door.

My friend David answered it.He didnt look different.He was light skin with braid like J Holiday.But he didnt have any facial hair.His jaws dropped when he seen me.Obviously he remembered me.

He picked me up by my waist and spun me around.I giggled as he put me down.

David:Oh shit!Brooklyn!Don't look no different.

He spun me around.

David:Got a lil thicker.

I spun back around and playfully slapped his arm and laughed.

Brooklyn:You stupid!

We laughed.

Curtis:Can we come in?

David:Oh yeah,come on.

We stepped inside.

Brooklyn:You know why we came right?Heard ya got a lil studio or whatever.

David:Oh yeah!It's not big it got a lil mic and recorder and all dat.Stuff like a studio.

Brooklyn:Oh.Ok.Let's check it out.

He lead us to a room.Like he said there was a wall with a mic and stuff and stuff so that we can kisteb to it.It wasnt big but it was good.

David:Yall wanna test it?

Curtis:Yeah.

Curtis grabbed the mic like it was a piece of food and he was starving.David put on a beat I never heard before.He must of made it himself.He could be a great producer but he wanted to get into basketball.He was good ay basketball but way better at making beats.

Anyway,Curtis started to rap into the mic.I say down in a chair on the other side and watched.He was really gettin into it.I could tell by the way he was bobbing his head to the beat.Next thing you know he say something bout me getin into the song.He stuck the mic out towards me.I got up and took the mic.I started rapping some stuff I had wrote and memorized in Atlanta.

After we were done David rewinded it and played it over.We listened to ourselves and kept laughing and giggling.

David:Yall hot though.

Brooklyn:And da beat was fresh.Yo we make a good team.

We laughed and slapped hands.I went and sat back on the chair.

David:I gotta start makin my dinner and stuff so Ima run to da store.Yall want anything.

We shook our heads and Davind got up and left.It was now just me and Curtis.

Curtis:So was we def or what?

Brooklyn:Yeah our flow was sick though for real.

We laughed.

Brooklyn:You know while I was thinkin bout you back in Atlanta.

Curtis then looked at me with a very confused look on his face.

Brooklyn:And um...I been meanin to ask you somethin.

He then started to look really concerned.

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Heeheehee!Ima make yall wait!Lol oh um Ill start off with 8 votes and comments plzz!Thanxx!!!!=]

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