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He kept his lips pressed against mine.I swear I woulda thought it felt good but somethin was sayin "Stop cause dis aint right."I put my hand on his chest and pushed him back a little.

Paula:Umm,we gotta slow down.

Chris:Why?

Paula:This is goin a lil too fast for me.

Chris:Oh.

Paula:Why you say it like dat?

Chris:'Cause I know what your thinkin.You thinkin' you too good for me.

I looked at him in shock.He was jumpin to a huge conclusion dat wasnt even true.

Paula:I did not say that!

Chris:I know you were thinkin it.Face it you think you too rich for me.

I shook my head.

Paula:Your sick!Im outa here!

Chris:How you gon do dat?

I thought.

Paula:I-I'll catch a cab.

He laughed and shook his head.He dropped his head still laughing.

Paula:What is so damn funny?!?

Chris:You must be too  rich cause everybody know aint no cab 'round here.

He laughed some more.I had a look of disgust by then.

Paula:So da fuck what,I'll call a ride.Duces!

I got out da car and slammed da door.I stormed through da lot.All of a sudden I scream because a car came speedin down the lot.I put my hands on the front of da car as if I could stop it.I see it was a boy driving.But I didnt wait long enough to see if I knew him.I immediately marched to the side of the car and banged on the driver's tented windows.

He let it down and I seen who it was.It was Tyrell!Chris's brother.

Paula:You dumbass!Why da hell would you speed down the fuckin lot!

Tyrell:My bad shawty.I didnt mean to.Why would I hit a pretty girl like you.

I tried my best not to smile and blush and all dat.But my frown did loosen up.

Paula:Well why was you speeding?!?

Tyrell:Just for da hell of it.

I rolled my eyes and giggled.

Tyrell:Are you smiling?

Dat actually made me grin.

Tyrell:It's pretty on you.

I giggled some more.

Paula:You got dat from The Fresh Prince of Bel-Air.

He laughed.

Tyrell:Yeah.So why you by yoself.

Paula:Ummm....nothin just left a couple of friends.

I didnt want to tell him about Chris.

Tyrell:Oh.So do you need a ride?

Paula:You know I live on da other side of town right?

Tyrell:Hey I get money.

I smiled.

Paula:Aight.

I ran on da other side of da car and got in.He got us outa the lot and started to go the other way from home.

Paula:My house da other way.

Tyrell:Can I just spend some time wit cha?

I decided to and we roamed da city.Though it was dark he took me to a lot by the beach.We had chatted for a minute.

Tyrell:So umm....you got a boyfriend?

Paula:No.

Tyrell:Do you want one?

I looked at him.

Paula:You askin me out boy?

Tyrell scooted toward me.

Tyrell:Uh yeah.

I chuckled.He seemed sweet.

Paula:Yeah.

He went in for a kiss.Of course I let him kiss me.Then we started gettin nore into it.Let's just say he's on top of me kissin my neck and this time the same voice in my head was sayin "Keep going."

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Oh dope right lol j/k 10 votes and comment plzz =]

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On January 26th 2008 haylesrox Said :
haylesrox ohhh hiz bro aint gonna be happy, lol but itz good keep me posted
On January 22nd 2008 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz agree with gosdfy.. i think he gon be mad! keep me posted!
On January 19th 2008 oxXxlovelyxXxo Said :
oxXxlovelyxXxo naw i agree with koraney and aliyah1994 dis is dope lol kmp
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On January 19th 2008 qosdfyjvwefayv Said :
qosdfyjvwefayv 0_0 ohhh no Tyrell's bro iz gonna b madddd!!! kmp!!! =]]
On January 19th 2008 ALIYAH1994 Said :
ALIYAH1994 it is DOPE ma...LUHV IT...plz kmp!!!
On January 18th 2008 Koraney Said :
Koraney DERE GURL DAT IS DOPE AND DAMN IT IS GETTIN SO EXCITIN PLZ PLZ KEEP ME POSTED