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Shadow ~~~ch1~~~

Other Created on 5-30-08 Views(64) Story Rating G

My soul is gone.  My mortal life, a memory.  Good ridance!  I am a vampire, and my name is Ally.

I wasnt always a vampire.  It all happened 5 years ago...

I was alone.  I had just found out my bf was cheating on me with my bff.  So i took a knife and stabbed them.  Fine, whatever.  I took off.  I checked into a hotel (under a fake name), set the alarm, and went to sleep.  I woke several hours later at a sharp pain in my neck.

"OW!"  I yelled

a male voice shushed me.  "Now," he said,"I am going to ask you a few questions.  Your going to answer truthfully.  One, did you kill Jenny McClond and Eric Fisher?"

I nodded, unsure of what to do.

"good.  Two, do you want to live forever?"

live forever?  huh?  i just nodded.

and with that, i passed out.  I didnt wake until several days later.  The guy who changed me was there too.

"i'm Nick, by the way."

It was then that i got to see his face.  He was handsome enough, with dark blue-green eyes and long brown hair.

That is the story of how i got changed.  We went around for about two years, from town to town.  And then, i killed him.

This is what I have for the moment.  Anyone want me to continue???

 

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On May 31st 2008 TLee14 Said :
TLee14 was great please continue
On May 30th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh a little more detail but it was good and i hope that you keep me posted and keep going