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Blue Eyed Wonder [Chapter 10]
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Chapter 10
She hesitantly leaned in, bringing her face very close to his. Carla breathed in and got lost in his scent. She finally came to her senses and realized what she was about to do. The look on Bretts face was a look of sincere fright, so Carla backed away.
"Sorry," she blushed, tucking a piece of hair behind her ear. "I guess I'm pushing limits."
"As am I," Brett replied. "Just being here with you can turn out so dangerous."
He flashed another one of his grins, and Carla melted on the inside. Suddenly she realized a part of the story was missing.
"Why would he have Mark rape me? How will that help him out?" she thought, forgetting Brett's powers.
"Ah, I was wondering when you would get to that part," he said, chuckling slightly.
Carla frowned at Brett. He frowned right back and then hugged her.
"I know this is a serious issue, and something you're not fully understanding. The issue isn't what I'm laughing at." He continued, "I'm laughing at your innocence, and your naivity. It's only making me want you more and more."
Carla smiled, but Brett's embrace suddenly became more rigid. The warmth left as he pulled away.
"You're mom's rounding the corner. I should go," Brett stated, sounding worried.
Carla smiled, "No, it's fine. I'll introduce you as a new friend from school. She won't mind."
Brett shrugged as they watched a maroon '02 Taurus pulled into the driveway.
Carla's mom got out of the car, seeming slightly agitated.
"Hi mom! How was work?" Carla questioned, trying not to upset her even more.
"Ciao bambina. It was busy, I'm very tired," she sighed. Her Italian accent was heavy, making some of her English hard to understand.
"Chi è questo ragazzo?" Carla's mother asked her.
((Translates into "Who is this boy?"))
"This is Brett. He's a friend of mine from school. He walked me home today, and we've been sitting outside talking. I haven't had a chance to get inside yet."
Carla's mother flashed a smile at Brett as he came over and took her hand.
"Hello, Mrs. Madder. It's very nice to meet you," he smiled as he bent down and kissed her hand.
"Is this boy Italian?" her mother joked. "I like him," she smiled as she went inside.
Brett laughed out loud as he said, "I'm far from Italian."
Carla laughed along, until she remembered what she needed answered.
"So how is Mark raping me going to get me to like Harrison more?"
"Well, he is going to play the whole 'just happened to stop over card' before Mark can get your pants off. He'll see Mark, yell at him, throw a few punches, and you'll be over him like fleas on a dog."
Carla laughed as his analogy, but then frowned when she realized what was going on.
"Brett, I won't let this happen. But I don't know how to stop him," Carla said as she sat back on the ground and pulled her knees into her chest.
"This goes back to the fact that I love you so much, I won't let myself hurt you. If I can keep myself, a bloodsucking, neck biting vampire, away from you, I can sure as hell keep some mortal ass from hurting you."
Suddenly, Brett tensed up. He bared his teeth and his eyes went black as night. He let out a low growl, and assumed a pounce position.
"He's here," he barely said above a whisper.
"Who? Harrison or Mark?" she asked.
"Harrison. He's planning to ask you out for ice cream tonight. I highly recommend you don't go."
"I won't. But you can't be standing like that. He'll know something's up," Carla stated.
Brett left his pounce and sat in a chair. However he was still tense, and his eyes still midnight black.
They suddenly heard footsteps up the stairs to the porch.
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| On December 2nd 2007 brunettechild Said : | |
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how did she find out he was a vampire?
well, keep me posted=] |
| On December 2nd 2007 qosdfyjvwefayv Said : | |
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i luhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhv it so keep me posted!!! |
| On December 1st 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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i love it, so amazing |
| On December 1st 2007 blondechickx3 Said : | |
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eek.
its great!! |
| On December 1st 2007 Patriciaxox Said : | |
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stupid cliff hangers. well anyways. keep me postted please! |
| On December 1st 2007 loveXafterXall Said : | |
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guys can be so stupid, lol =] keep me posted! |
| On December 1st 2007 omfg010203 Said : | |
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iii loooveeee this!!! stupid harrison! i juss cant get over wat he planned!! |
| On December 1st 2007 anniej94 Said : | |
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this is a great story-i kind of reminds me of the Twilight series by stephenie meyer, good job. |
| On December 1st 2007 heathsgurl94 Said : | |
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oh oh brett sounds sexyyy. hhaha |
| On December 1st 2007 jennaferz Said : | |
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awoooh. this is such a sexy story. =]] |
| On December 1st 2007 necrosiss Said : | |
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O boy I can't wait to see harrisons reaction when he sees brett around her. Lolll. Keep me posted |
| On December 1st 2007 hippppoo101 Said : | |
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ooooo i like it plz keep me posted and whoot first comment yay me lol |


