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The Biter
Short
 Created on 6-22-07
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 Story Rating G
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There was this girl and she had a great life. Her parents loved and adored her. She was expecting a new lil sis. And her house just got painted her fav. color... red.
A few years after her sis was born things stared to go wrong. Her parents were fightn, her house was falln apart, her sis was mean, and school sucked. Now that her rents were fightn she started to act out in school and started to bit kids. She was only about seven at the time so she didn't get sued or anything.
She thought that if her parents were too busy punishing her then she could prevent them from fightn. She also liked to see the RED blood come from peoples arms after she bit them.
She was wrong about her parents, they didn't stop fightn and it just got worse. When the biteing and fighting in school didn't help she decided to clam up and not eat. That didn't work either.
A couple weeks after that her mom decided to move out. After her mom left her dad decided it was time for them to leave to so they picked up everything and moved to a remote spot.
Now they have a great life. The sisters are closer then ever and thier dad is much happier.They try to forget about the olden days, except when her dad calls her his little biter. Oh how she HATES that name.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On January 23rd 2008 Wyldemiller Said : | |
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Quite interesting piece of work Paige :) I like it and the visuals there help bring the words off the page itself. Thanks for sharing and I really did enjoy it :) |
| On December 10th 2007 BaByBoOe Said : | |
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Nice story! |
| On December 5th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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wow. i like this good job. i could see this play out in my head...spelling aside it's a good one. |
| On November 27th 2007 crazpaige Said : | |
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This story is not about me!!! I hate the color red!!! |
| On June 22nd 2007 hannah2sam Said : | |
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wow is that y you hate the color red? |
