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My 17th birthday (part 5)

Fiction Created on 9-7-07 Views(124) Story Rating G

     After me and Shade united, I asked him what was in the box. “Oh yea. Baby now I know you are going to be emotional so don’t cry.” Shade said jokingly. “Baby! Be serious!” As I was saying that, he opened the box. There was a beautiful ten carat diamond ring in it! “Damn bro! You be stacking don’t cha?!” Cameron said. I just stood there with my mouth wide open; not moving or anything! Then Ciara pulled me to the side. “I know your shocked, but I just couldn’t tell you about that! Lala? Lala?! Answer me!!!” She said air wiping her hand up and down my face. “Uhhh?! What?!” I said with my eyes still glazing off into space. “Come on. You need some air Lala! For real!!!” Ciara said pulling me through the doors in which I came in.

 

 

     Once we got outside, we sat down on a concrete wall. “Lala?” Ciara said making sure I can hear her. “Yea?!” I turned to her with a straight face trying to understand what was going on. “Okay listen! I couldn’t tell you. Shade told me not to! Plus I just didn’t know how!” she said looking all sad and what not. “Oh so if he told you to jump off a bridge, you would do it?! You know what? I don’t even care! Just tell me what he’s planning on doing with that big ass ring?!” I said as Ciara was getting on my nerves. I really hope he’s not gonna do what I think he’s gonna do!!! “He’ll tell you! I told you I cant tell you.” “Please! Is he gonna do what I think he’s about to do?! I got to know!” I asked as I was looking straight dead in her eyes. She just couldn’t look me back in the eyes. Right then, I, Lala Johnson, was now scared of the answer! Then I heard Shade’s voice saying, “Lala, can I talk to you alone?” I looked up, there he was. He had this look on his face. As if this was between life or death. His eyes was hoping I would get up and follow him so he can talk to me. .. .. ..

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On September 12th 2007 ALIYAH1994 Said :
ALIYAH1994 OMG, plz write more
On September 9th 2007 jaylynn142434 Said :
jaylynn142434 omg the suspense! let me no wen the next 1 is out!!
On September 8th 2007 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 veeeeery nice!!!!i like cant wait to see what happens!:]
On September 8th 2007 blondechickx3 Said :
blondechickx3 its still good =]
On September 7th 2007 crankdatshit94 Said :
crankdatshit94 SORRY ITS SOOOO SHORT!!!! I HAVENT HAD THE TIME TO WRITE ALOT SINCE I STARTED SKOOL.