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My 17th birthday (part 3)

Fiction Created on 8-23-07 Views(111) Story Rating G

     As I wake up, I remember that today is the day is the day that I meet Ciara at the mall. And get everything straighten out. I get up and sit on the side of my blue and green comforter that I slept over last night thinking if I really should deal with her. But if I want an answer, I have to go. So I make my way to the bathroom and get in the shower. After, I dry myself off and wrap my towel around me while I brush my teeth and do my hair. Then my hose phone rings and its CC. so I answer it. “I’m on my way.” I say picking out a pair of jeans out of my closet and a new white halter top from my drawer. “Well hurry up about it!!! Oh and make sure you look sexy.” Ciara said in a really quick voice. “Now you know I always be looking sexy and fly! And don’t get that twisted! May I please ask why you want me to?” I said with a little attitude in my voice. “Let’s just say.. .. You’ll be happy you did. Oh, I got to go. But meet me there at 12 okay?” “Yea okay. Bye.” “Bye.” Then we hung up. I could not think of anything of what Ciara was planning. So I got dressed. Put my white earrings on and my air force ones on. I did put on a little bit of lip balm on and a few perfume. And then I was out the door.

     When I got into my black range rover, my favorite song was on the radio. “Love Like Honey. By Pretty Ricky.” I absolutely loved that song. So I pumped it as loud as the radio could go and I drove out of the driveway towards the mall. Like a mile away from the mall, I called Ciara to ask where she would be at. “Ay where you at?” I say finally pulling into the parking lot. “ I’m at the food court.” she said with a lot of noise in the background. “Okay, I’m on my way. I just need to park my car then I’ll be in.” “Okay bye.” she said and hung up. So I found me a parking space and walked into the doors of the food court.

     As I walked into the doors, there was a lot of people! I didn’t even know which way to go. Then my cell had a text message.. It was CC. “IM AT SHOMARS” it had read. I hated when she wrote in capital letters when she be texting me. So I looked up and seen Shomars and I started walking over there. Then by just a glance, I seen a fine boy! He was tall, nice clothes, looking fresh with his shoes, and he had some pretty eyes! He was just perfect. But, I have Shade. I can’t be cheating on my man.. .. ..although he live in Florida.. .. .. I can’t do it!!! So I walk away. “Bye bye cute boy” I say in my head then I see Ciara with a big smile on her face. I walk all the way to her.

     “Hey CC. Why are you smiling like that?” I say giving her the weirdest look ever. “Oh nothing.” she says hugging me. “Okaayyy .. Anyways what’s this surprise you were giving me?!” I said very excitedly. I just can’t wait to see what she got me!!!! Was it something that I wanted a long time ago?! I don’t know. “oh and you need to tell me the deal with you.. Seriously.” “I’ll get to that. But first you got to turn around!” Ciara said pointing and looking behind me with that huge big smile again. So I turn around.. .. .. .. .. ..

And see .. .. .. WHO DO YOU THINK IT IS???

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On June 3rd 2008 UPTmrscarter93 Said :
UPTmrscarter93 i think its shade too why would she b on the phone with him
On August 23rd 2007 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 I think it's Shade :) Good story!!