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+ 2	Perfect-ok-sad-worst-
+ 2	grate life.
+ 4	boy+girl=baby

there was this kid named Devon. He lived with his mom and step dad. o you cant forget his brother. they lived in a small twon. he had lots of friends that loved o so vary much. Now for the real story....

Devon: mom im home...

(no one there)

Devon: ok.... is any one home?

(still no one)

Devon: come on this is not funny guys! Were are you?

(No one there still)

Devon: ok.... still o one there... well then

(so he starts txting his brothers phone..... he heres it.

Devon: Ok see i told you! you were in here why did you do that to me i though something happened. (yelling.. NOOOOOOOOOOOO)

when he saw his brother just sitting there with a knife in him.

Devon: calls his friend Danielle.... Danielle i need help.

Danielle: ok with what? (in a voce that is confused)

Devon: its my brother i think he is dead i need help! (in a voice that Danielle has never hered him in)

Danielle: ok call 911 so will i ok just stay there he will be ok. ok!

Devon: ok.

Phone hangs up.

Devon: No stay you cant there will be help just hang in there bro ok plz just hang in there for a little bit longer!

There HERE!

the caps: ok what happened?

Devon: I DONT KNOW just help him cant you see him dieing!

Caps: ok ok just clam down ok son

Devon: NO you can t make me clam down cant you see him dieing there! how would you like to come homw and maybe have your brthter there. but see that he might be dead!

Caps.ok your right i cant make you do anything just that he will be ok. ok!

Devon ok Fine! just if he dies i die to!

Caps: what does that mean?

Devon: if he dies and is not here tomorrow then i will kill myself!

caps: o no you want there is one thing that i can make you do! NOT kill your self!

Devon: i will i will i swar!

caps: hey im going to take you to a friends house ok.

Devon: fine take me there then.

driving in the car.

Caps: Devon...

Devon: yeah what?

caps: you are going to go to your gramas ok.

Devon: fine! hey when will i hear about my brother?

caps: soon ok:

                                   3 Days later!

phone rings:

Caps: is devon there?

Devon yeah its Devon:

Capes: Devon your brother had past away last night just plz dont kill your self and just one more thing we found your mom and step dad sorry but they had died too. can i speake to your gradma?

Devon: NO she's npt here! ( ina voice that is crying!)

caps: ok well sorry.

Phone gets hang up?

.......

                                      5 months later!

Devon is doing better but is still haveing trubles. we are try the best to help him with it.....

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