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Sarah...a sad girl in a messed up world
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 Created on 3-22-08
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Such a smart girl in such a cruel world. "Sarah's so foolish" "Why did she stay" "She shud just go, noone likes her anyway". They sneer and make fun of her sanity and withdrawal, wen little did they of the sadness, then the death, of everyone, friends and family.
Such a sad girl in such a dumb world. "Sarah shud just die" I always see that dummy cry" They were so foolish, they had no clue, of the anger that could be conjered on that cue.
A mad girl in a mad town, now what do u think she did? lets just say that everyone disapeared and Sarah never remembered how they did...
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Please Login to post comments| On March 23rd 2008 CaPlanePourToi Said : | |
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I like it. If it's like an epic poem, [Beowulf, The Odessy] put it in that format so we see the rhythm we're supposed to be reading it in. I like the twist, too. It's good. Plus one from me. |
| On March 22nd 2008 cmossy2003 Said : | |
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In the third line after "they" i was suposed to put the word "know" |
| On March 22nd 2008 cmossy2003 Said : | |
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i kno its like a poem but tel me if u think its ok. ^_^ |
