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Eluding Danger (Chapter 13)

Drama Created on 4-11-08 Views(56) Story Rating G

"B-b-but that's just not possible!" I repeated quietly, my voice nearly frozen in shock. "My mother died when I was three..."

"Elizabeth, it is 100% true, dear!" my 'mother' replied. "I'm here in flesh and blood talking to you, how can I not be real?" I thought for a few moments, pondering how my mother could be here. After coming up with no answers, I decided to ask her so-called 'mother' a few questions.

"Well, if you are my real mother," I said quickly, "then why aren't you dead?"

"Well," the woman replied, "I never was dead." I stared at ther stupidly, so the strange woman continued with her explanation. "You see, I didn't really die, and that's how I'm here now, alive! I ran away from home and set up a story that I had disappeared to fool people that I was dead, then I ran away from home. Really, I just wanted to get away from your horrible, cold-hearted father." I listened thouroughly to her explanation, but was not convinced.

"Even if that is true, then how did you find me?" I asked, my heart beating quickly. The woman who was claiming to be my mother looked directly into my eyes, seemingly thinking quickly. "I was in the right place at the right time, I suppose..." she replied. I simply stared at her.

"No, you weren't!" I suddenly screamed. The woman, taken by surprise, fell out of her chair and onto the filthy dirt floor. She looked up at me, an expression of pure terror on her face. Why is she so scared? I thought to myself. What does this lady think I'm capable of? I came up with no answers but I did make the decision to take this opportunity to find out some answers; if she was afraid and thought that I could harm her, then maybe she'd tell the truth!

"Tell me how you found me, or I swear I'll tear your freakin' head off with my bare hands," I said, falsely breathing heavily. The woman stared at me in shock.

"My motherly instincts," she replied lamely, her eyes huge.

 

"I don't believe you!" I yelled again, this time truely angry. The woman just looked at me as if she had never seen a young girl. I became enreaged at her stupidity. Why wouldn't she just answer my questions? If she was my true mother, she'd at least give me some idea of what had happened and how she had found me. I came to the conclusion that she was surely an imposter, so I prepared to get this worthless woman out of my way, just then, a loud rapping on the door disrupted the near silence in the room. I turned to see who it was, and I felt a nozzle being put to my head. Just as she put the large gun to my head, 12 other people walked into the room, wearing the same steange uniforms that the plane people were wearing.

"If you say anything," one of the large men said, "then you won't live to see the sun again, dearie." I uttered a small squeak of terror as he finished his sentence and a thick bag was pulled over my head. I felt a large blow hit my temple, and fell unconcious once again as the strangers gragged me out of the burrow that I had so easily been lured in to.

 

Sorry it took so long, but I've been preparing for a trip and have been otherwise simply busy. =] Please rate, I'm not getting as many rates as I used to >.<

Also, I'm starting a new story about a young girl at shcool who finds a good friend [not as boring as it sounds] so please check it out too!!! =]

 

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On April 15th 2008 surefirefailur Said :
surefirefailur these cliffhangers are killing me!
On April 14th 2008 meesemen Said :
meesemen OMG this rocks so hard kmp