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Eluding Danger (Chapter 4)

Drama Created on 2-13-08 Views(97) Story Rating G

We stopped outside of a small building. It was run-down and made of deep burgudy bricks. I was immediately aware that this was an important area, so my trust for Dan grew. I ran to the front door and anxiously knocked. It slowly creeped open. Inside I was introduced to some of the people who Dan had formerly worked with: there was Jillian, the forensic analogist, Jorge, the scientologist, and Nathaniel, the reporter. There were many others, but I didn't have enough time to be introduced to the lot of them. The ones I did meet, Jillian, Jorge, and Nathaniel, lead me down thriugh an immensly dark hallway. We stopped at one of the doors on the end. It was nearly 20 feet tall and made of a dark material. It had a metallic luster about it and it seemed to give off a bad vibe. Everytime I got near the door a shiver as cold as ice was sent through my spine.

"Inside this door is the key to your mission and your future," Nathaniel explained. He opened the door in a manner that gave off no hint to what was behind the door. I watched in astonishment as the door opened. Inside I saw the most incredible site I have ever seen.........

Please don't be mean! I wrote this in a hyper mood at my friend's house so it might be horrible! Please rate, and I'm still happy to get any advice!!!!!!!!!

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On March 1st 2008 meesemen Said :
meesemen i love this story so freakin much write more!!!
On February 18th 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said :
xxXrareloveXx When are you gonna write more?
On February 17th 2008 sweetie1294 Said :
sweetie1294 wow you right good
On February 17th 2008 babygurl161991 Said :
babygurl161991 wow kmp
On February 16th 2008 DanteH Said :
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hmm, this one might need a little bit more work but im still interested as to what happens!!!
On February 14th 2008 surefirefailur Said :
surefirefailur Um, you know Scientology is a religion, right, and not a science? We're you meaning to say he was a scientist. And if the guy, Jorge, really is a Scientoligist, than what the frik is he doing at and FBI headquarters?
On February 13th 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said :
xxXrareloveXx sounds interesting,(sounds like a quest ; ]) kmp !!! luv it