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Allie’s Story

Allie woke up in Daniel’s arms. She was a little chilly and for a minute was confused. Then she remembered that she wanted him to take her to the park and she guessed that she had fallen asleep and he didn’t want to leave her alone. And she was glad for that fact. Allie couldn’t deal with her parents right then. In fact she didn’t want to deal with anyone she knew before Daniel saved her. She wanted them all to disappear…. well only the people that had hurt her before. Them she wanted to make them suffer for how they hurt her. Revenge. That was want she wanted she wanted to push them off a cliff with no one there to save them. Sure Allie would never do that, but she could image it couldn’t she. When she was little she use to imagine that they would just blow up. There would be no more problems. Just a little bomb that was all. Or poison. But she got help, sadly that help was Drew. She had met him when everything was going wrong and she needed all of the friends that she could possibly get. He was there for her and he let her down. Going home was out of the question. She had runaway the day she found Bailey with Drew. She was going to talk to him, ask for his advise. Now she lives at the park. Daniel must think that she is the strangest person that he has ever met. He would never want to kill himself or anyone else, Allie thought. She couldn’t be more wrong. Slowly she went back to sleep…

 Allie’s DreamNo longer was it Drew and I, but Daniel and I. He is perfect. Standing there waiting for something…or someone. I stood off to the side watching…waiting…to see what he might do. Please don’t be like Drew I thought out loud. Squeezing my eyes shut, not wanting to see any more, and yet I knew that I would see and hear it all. It will be in my mind now. Him waiting and looking there for someone and me hiding in the bushes so he can’t see me. I hear a person walking to him. I look, but I can’t see the person’s face. It is torture, I have to stand there and watch him look at her with love in his eyes. What I wouldn’t give to be that person. I start crying. I cry over a lot of things that hurt me, true I am a very emotional type of person, but that is because life gives me reasons to cry. I make myself look over at them and this time I can see her face, but just barley though my tears. I brush them away to get a better look. I look hard and then I realize…the girl is me. He is looking at me with love in his eyes and I him. My tears stop, now I am smiling happy that he loves me. Happy that he is there with me and happy to just me standing looking at me, and that is good enough for him.

Allie was asleep with a smile on her face, and her heart full of love and happiness. She really thought that she could be happy again…and it only took a near death experience for her to realize that. It is amazing how you can put thing into a mind, and they will believe it to be true. Soon she woke up though and wanted to leave. But then again she wanted so bad to stay, she took the keys and went to where she knew Daniel would follow. She wanted him to follow. She went to the cliff. She drove up slowly and sat down at the edge. She was just looking out into the sky. After a while she heard footsteps and look over her shoulder and saw Daniel out of breath coming up to her. She was just so happy that he was there that she started crying. Daniel hugged Allie and when she looked up at him with big eyes he brushed the tears off of her face and kissed her. A perfect kiss. A kiss that shows that they love each other.

 Daniel’s Story

Daniel was tired and when he fell asleep he couldn’t help but think of Allie. A million questions were running through his head while he slept. Questions like, why did she want to die? Is she mad that I saved her? Were does she really live? Is she happy that I am here, or does she want me to leave? He could help it. He needed to know the answers to these questions. For now however he was just too tired and he soon he those thoughts stopped interrupting his perfect sleep.

 Daniel’s DreamI woke up to find Allie not there. She left me, as much as I didn’t believe it she did. I sat there shocked. Well then again she didn’t really know me I would have run off too if I was she. I cried. It just hit me I might never see her again, ever. I cried for a good long time until I stood up. She took her car. I had to walk…but where to? The Cliff was all that was running through my head. I started walking and soon I was running. Fast too fast I was going to fall…I could see the cliff. I tried to stop but I couldn’t. I saw Allie there and I was gaining speed. I was about to run off the cliff but then she stepped out in front of me and stopped me from running any farther. A few feet away from the edge, she had saved me from falling just like I saved her. I couldn’t help it I had to hug her. But when I put my arms around her she pulled away. As if she was cold, she took a step back, and another, so if she took one more she would fall. It happened in slow motion she stepped into the air looking lost and confused. She fell slowly I tried to reach out and grab her but she wouldn’t take it and kept falling. She fell all the way down and into the water she went. She didn’t even put up a fight. I dived I was about to hit the water…Daniel woke up fast and scared from his dream. He didn’t know what had happened to Allie…or him. Did they live or did they die. Allie! He didn’t feel Allie’s warmth by him. He looked around and didn’t see her. He was frantic. He ran around checking the entire park. He was getting more and more worried. What if someone took her and she was hurt and scared! He checked his pockets and didn’t feel the keys, so the car was gone, no one but Daniel and Allie knew the car keys were there. That was unless they had forced it out of her. Daniel was left at the park, alone. He had no idea where she might be…and then he did. The cliff. He knew that she had gone up there, but he didn’t know if she was alive anymore. Running he went to the cliff. Not knowing what he would find. Miles he ran, but didn’t give up it was a long way and it made him tired, but he was more scared than tired. He didn’t want to take a chance when it came to Allie’s life. He took a deep breath and continued running. He was almost up there he could feel it she was up there he just knew it. She had to. He got to the top and then he saw her. Allie was sitting down by the cliff. Just looking. He walked up to her slowly not wanting to scare her. When she saw him she started crying. He didn’t know why but he felt like he had to make her happy again. He held her in his arms. Hugging her not wanting to let her go. He had lost her once and he never wanted that to happen again. Allie look up at him with the biggest most innocent eyes that he had ever seen and he brushed the tears away and kissed her. It felt like a dream them just sitting there kissing at the start of where they first saw each other. There was only one word to describe it for him…perfect.

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On December 1st 2007 kg108551 Said :
kg108551 Sweetness! I think this story is adorable! You've got me hooked! Keep it up!
On October 14th 2007 hottataneva101 Said :
hottataneva101 LOVE ITTT!!! KEEP ME POSTED PLZZZ OMG ur so gud chek out my stories too, plz, if you like
On October 14th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 he seems sweet.
On October 12th 2007 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 awwwwwwwwwww dis is soooo cute i l-o-v-e it!!!!lol keep me posted
On October 12th 2007 necrosiss Said :
necrosiss keep me posted btw!
On October 12th 2007 necrosiss Said :
necrosiss AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWH. why can't all guys be like Daniel lolzzz