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Your enemy may just be your first love part 3
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 Created on 6-14-08
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Aiddy and I walked back to the party. And as we walked in and I glanced at Logan and he was giving me a dirty look I smiled and walk over to my family to say hi.
Aiddy walked over to the food table. My brother Evan saw her and walked over too. So Aiddy what’s the answer to my text? Evan said.
No! she replied.
Why not? He asked.
Cause if you can’t believe my best friend who is your flesh and blood over your friends then you’re not worth dating. With that she walked over to me.
I looked up just to see my brother storm over to me and say what lies did you tell Aiddy to make her not want to date me?
I didn’t tell her any lies and plus someone who post to be your best friend proved what I told her by pushing me to the ground. I replied.
He pulled up his fist and was about to hit me when Aiddy jump in and said if you ever touch her I give you something to be embarrassed about.
With that he walked off.
Aiddy turned around and said are you aright?
Yeah. I replied.
Give me hug! she said. We hugged.
Aiddy you want to something? I asked.
What? She replied.
I’m glad you’re my bff cause if not I be dead right now. I said.
The party ended and Aiddy spend the night at my house but so did Logan…
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Please Login to post comments| On June 16th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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omg! |
| On June 14th 2008 bittyb1 Said : | |
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kmp!!!! |
| On June 14th 2008 Patriciaxox Said : | |
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I like where your story is going but you should type it in a Microsoft before posting so it can fix your errors. Instead of putting the quotes in color just put it with "" and with she said or he said. Her brother was nice then he wanted to punch her. THere is something wrong with that. So keep me posted. |
| On June 14th 2008 jaylynn142434 Said : | |
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kmp please |
| On June 14th 2008 MissCheerCap Said : | |
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ooooooh kmp!! please! lol
Haleylynn
lovin it dear |
| On June 14th 2008 MissCheerCap Said : | |
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ooooooh kmp!! please! lol
Haleylynn
lovin it dear |
| On June 14th 2008 BabyPenguins Said : | |
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ooo...very good... |
| On June 14th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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OK I JUST KNOW that sooner or later they HAVE TO get over the fight and i think that logan should be with her and her brother is a jerk for not beleiving his sister.... HIS LITTLE SISTER at that!!! PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On June 14th 2008 upyours911 Said : | |
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Plz kmp! |
| On June 14th 2008 bowzlady1 Said : | |
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kmp |
| On June 14th 2008 tiarenee08 Said : | |
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kmpp |
| On June 14th 2008 Kdanae88 Said : | |
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ohh.. I like where this is going! =) |
| On June 14th 2008 cheerleader725 Said : | |
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Comment and rate please! |
