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Your enemy may just be your first love
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 Created on 6-13-08
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Freshman year was great but I knew summer would be even better. My brother had just graduated from high school so as the normal we have a graduation party. My brother invited one of his friends that I had never met before. He was cute but he had the worst attitude. When my brother introduced us he was nice but the minute my brother walk away he told me that “I wasn’t aloud to talk to my brother the whole party.”
I said “ What gives you the right to say who I can talk to”
He said “ That a lil sister would totally ruin my brother kool”
I punched him right in the face and stormed off. I started laugh when I saw his nose bleeding. My brother came up to me and said “why did you do that” I said “Because he said I wasn’t aloud to talk to you the whole party”
I could see the anger in my brother face “he my best friend he would never say that to my sis” I said “Well if you believe your friend over me then get a new sister”
I walk off in anger. I walk to the swings and set down. This is the place my brother and I used to go and play. Thoughts ran throw my mind “I can’t believe my brother would pick him over.”
I realized that my brother friend was walking and I looked away. He sat on the swing next to me and said “I waiting for you to say sorry”
I said “Why Should I say sorry to you”
He was holding his nose and said, “You had no right to break my nose”
I turn and give him a dirty look “I had know right to hit you? Ha if you hadn’t said what you said then I wouldn’t have hit you.” I walk off and…
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Please Login to post comments| On June 16th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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Ooah! Nasty! lol nah I love it! Off to read 2! |
| On June 14th 2008 BabyPenguins Said : | |
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awsome! |
| On June 13th 2008 tiarenee08 Said : | |
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kmpp |
| On June 13th 2008 bowzlady1 Said : | |
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I like it, but there are alot of mistakes which make It kind of confusing. KMP though. |
| On June 13th 2008 upyours911 Said : | |
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I like it, plz kmp! |
| On June 13th 2008 Kdanae88 Said : | |
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I like the idea of this story but you make it kind of confusing when you put things in quotation when they dont need to be. |
| On June 13th 2008 Kdanae88 Said : | |
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I like the idea of this story but you make it kind of confusing when you put things in quotation when they dont need to be. kmp tho please
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| On June 13th 2008 AirplaneMan Said : | |
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true story I propose? |
| On June 13th 2008 cheerleader725 Said : | |
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The brother name is Evan the main character name is nicole and the best friend name is logan |
| On June 13th 2008 cheerleader725 Said : | |
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