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My unknown Crush part 6

Creative Created on 6-13-07 Views(83) Story Rating G

Part 1 

I start high school hoping to get a boyfriend and I been the normal girl and ive had many crush and boyfriends but this boy was different. At first i thought he was annoying cause all i wanted to do was to be left alone but he want to annoy me and try to get me to smile. He did of course get me to smile cause he stole my drink and when give it back he made a big show out of it but acting like I was the Queen and he the lonely server and said " Madma I have stolen your drink and I am deep sorry" he got down on his knees to give it to me but I really didn't like him in that way cause he was a senior and i a freshman and it really didn't look right. But as time grew I start to get a crush on him cause he was funny and i like it when guys make me laugh but most of the girls at my school told me that i would have a chance in hell with him but it didn't stop me from liking him.

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Part 2

Well I as i said before he bugged but I start to like him even more but then I heard a rumor that he like me but I was like its polly a joke cause Ive had that done to me before and one time I went to ask the guy bout it and he said he didn't know anything bout it and I felt so embassared but I got over it. Well one day he came up to me said I know you polly areally heard his but I really like and I said your playin a joke on me and then your going to laugh with you friend after ward and He said I not playin and I said sure! Well the next day when I came to school he did the sweetest thing but it retard and he put poster up all over the school tell people that he like me and i went up to him and he was stand with friends and I went up and tapped on his shoulder and he said WHAT DO YOU WANT cause he thought it was someone else! Well I said Why in the fuck are you yelling at me if anyone should be yelling it should be me! He said why? I was like are you serious and he said yes! Well let see first of all you poster up all over the school tell everyone basiclly that we were love! He was like im story I just wanted you to go out with and I said then you should have just asked me and not made in ass out of your self and he said well I sorry but well you go out with me and i said and then kissed me on the cheek and give me a hug and we what to class holding hands. By the way the guys name is drew!

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Part 3

Well after class we were walking down the hall and some girl comes up and starts hug all over him with me hold his hand right next to him and then she give me this mean look and said "It wont last a week". But I didn't care because it wasn't her hand he was holding. Well being a freshman and He being a senior in all we had different class but still he walk me to mine know that he was going to be late and then when we got there he kiss me on my cheek and give me a hug and said I'll see you after class sweety but I told him later on that he had to call me something else cause that made me feel old but at the time it was really sweet. Well when I got into class everyone was looking at me because that had just saw what he did and a boy asked me has he kissed you on the lips yet and i said no because when he trys i tell him that im not ready to get that close yet and says I'm and sorry and give me a kiss on my cheek.

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Part 4

After Class drew walked up behide me and grabed my hips and bout made jump out of my skin cause I didn't know he was behide me. But the boy that asked me that question earlier came by and was laugh well I grabed drew and told him to kiss me on the lips and he did the boys month drop open ; so I got to laugh. Well then drew asked me I thought you weren't ready to be kissed on the lips and I said I am now but Im not ready for anything else. Well he said do you want to go out on saturday with me and I said yes and then I asked him where we were going so I could wear the right thing. He said I'll take you shopping after school and we well pick something out for the date let just say it some where romantic. I was like Im not have sex with drew and he said I know I just want to take you somewhere romantic so you can see my sweet side. Well it was time to go home and I asked drew to give me a ride home cause one it was raining and I would have walk home  and two my parent couldn't came and get me cause they were at work and drew said yes but aren't you scared that something may happen to you if there alone and I said well fine then you can stay with me but I still not going to do anything with you and he said fine I wasn't askin I just didn't want my girlfriend to have to stay home alone. well we went to mall and and drew picked out this red sparkly dress and toke it into the dressing room and I walked in there and told him to get out and like why it not like i haven't seen a girls body before and I said out and he walk and went and got the shoe that came with the dress and I walk out the dressing room and his month droped open he said your so beaty and then kiss me and we start make out and he push back into dressing room and start to touch me when we were making out and I stopped and I was like drew I told im not ready so he walk back out and I got dress and he payed for dress and we went to car and on the way to my house he turn and looked at me and said Im sorry for what happened and it wont happen again I promise inless you want it and I said how can I know that he said because I love you and when you don't want something then I wont do it ok.

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Part 5

well we pulled up to my house and he asked me do you still want me to come in and I said sure and he said wait a min. and got out and run around to my side and opened the door and I said your so sweet. well I opened the door to my house and he said are you going to give me the grand tour and I said sure just let me put this in my room and he said we can start there and i said no we well start here and I'll show my room when we get there so I put the dress up stair and came back down and him be a guy in all he found the surround sound. I was like you  like and he said yeah i do and i said its my dads and this would happen to be the living room and in there where you walk in is the front room and samantha area (thats my dads cat) then this is the dinner room/ computer room and there the half bath room. then if you walk in here this the kit..... he then kissed me in med sentence and I said you told me you wanted the grand tour and he said when i said grand tour I did mean for you to tell me where thing is. I said ok well let me show you the basement/ workout room. What i mean one side its a basement the other workout like machines and then a tanning bed and a hot tub. well when we got down there he said maybe sometime we can get in the hot tub and I said maybe and then we went back up stairs and then we went up some more stair and I said that on the right is the full bathroom that room is my parents room and thats my brothers. well then i said well thats about all and he said what about that door and in my mind all I was thing about was he was going to try something again and i just wasn't ready. Well I said thats my room and he said I want to see it and he walked down the hall and opened the door and I stopped at the door way and he said why don't you come in and i said because I already seen it. Drew turned around and said i already told you that if your not ready for anything then I wasn't going to try anything. So I walked in and sat on my bed what a big mistake that was he came over and started making out with me then I layed back tryin to get away and he thought I was acting like I was ready and started kissing me more. which at this point he was on top of me and I tryed to get him off but I wasn't strong enough and he started kissing down my neck making what him even more but I knew I had to wait so I told him to get off and which he did I told him that i was sort've ready but i really didn't know him. And I said that he could wait 2 weeks i may do a little more with him but not all the way cause i promised my mom that I'd wait till I was married but she knew that i couldn't wait that long so she said that if i was truly in love with a boy and he truly in love with me then it was ok. So drew said ok I'll wait lets go down stair and watch a movie. Then my parent came home and...........

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Part 6

Well to me it was werid cause when my parents really didn't care that he was there actually it felt like they welcoming him and then they asked him if he would like to ccome with us to go out to eat and it was really werid cause every other boyfriend I've had they really didn't like them but I went along with till we got to resturant it was to go to be true my dad started askin him about jobs college and marriage and I started to blush but drew hanged all to well he told my dad that he wasn't going to collage because his dad owned a big store and when he graduated he would take it over and then marriage he hanged even better he said we I like you daughter right now but I have no idea where its going but If I loved your daughter i would wait till she graudte from high school and then marriage and then wait till after collage if she wanted to go start a family. Drew looked over at me and i looked like i about to pass out then i did I woke up with drew head over all i could hear was him saying boo bear are you ok and I started to say yeah and i blacked out again when I woke up i was in the hospital and drew said that I was going to be ok and i could go home in hour. And I justed smile and I said I know I just started going out with you but I love you and smile and kissed my on my lips and he said I Love you to boo bear. I got the ok to go home and drew told me home and then he asked my parents if he could stay with me just to make sure I don't black out again and they said it was ok with them if it was ok with his parents and that he didn't sleep in my bed he slep on the cot. He called his parents and asked and they said it was ok. So we stayed up most the night getting to know each other and then I asked him about our date tomorrow and he said if you want we can go and if it alright with your parents. When i woke the next morning i asked my parents if it was ok if i could go out with drew tonight and they said yes well he went home to get ready and I got ready at my house and put the dress on that drew had bought me and my came and said you so beaiful and where did you get that dress i said drew bought it for and My said he a really nice guy and I hope you go far with and I said I hope to. It was 8:00pm and drew came up to the door and knock my dad answer she well me right down when I came down he said hello boo bear and he was whering a turxo and I still didn't know where we were going but I hoped it would be fun and drew said he should be..............

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On February 9th 2008 xPunkxVanityx Said :
xPunkxVanityx good so far
On June 18th 2007 oreoash Said :
oreoash if you read over this, youll now how confusing it is with all the mispelling and missing words. but the story is good. he was wearing a Tux, where are they gonna go, to meet the president. lol
On June 13th 2007 cheerleader725 Said :
cheerleader725 it should be
On June 13th 2007 cheerleader725 Said :
cheerleader725 it should be