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the decline unto logic, a fictional short story

the decline unto logic, a fictional short story

Creative Created on 2-16-07 Views(257) Story Rating G

one day i was walking down the roadwhen i came upon a amn, muttering to himself.  what's the matter i asked him? the problem is neither here nor there he replied. i told him since it was neither here nor there it must not exist. the man leapt up at onc eand said cancer does not exist?!?!  it must not i said. i my head i thought that cancer patients must not exist either. no sooner did the thought come to me did the man fade into the wind like dust.  perturbed at my own acts, i fled down a dark alleyway, wrapped in my own thoughts.  shadows in beastly forms danced across the walls, and leered down upon me.  there can be no shadows , for there is no light i comforted myself. instantly the shadows vanished.  the lord almighty then appeared before me, bathed in light.  who are you to banish demons and eliminate sickness? he cried to me.  i am but a logictician i replied. he told me that all things were of him and he was of them, therefore they must exist. i thought and respnded, then will i never die since you are immortal and i am of you and you are of me?  the lord laghed and said good try, but death is also a part of me.  i realized his fallacy, and said then everything is dead and therefore does not exist!  thusly i brought about the end of the universe unwittingly and using only logic. THE END

this story does not reflect my views of life and is pure fiction 

 

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On July 23rd 2007 Slyclever Said :
Slyclever I like it! it's awesome! a little bit of typing errors haha :P but yeah all-around enjoyable to read!
On July 22nd 2007 worldlywise261 Said :
worldlywise261 haha i think it's funny =]
On July 2nd 2007 jjhassan Said :
jjhassan Heh, very nice. But if ye could write it out with paragraphing and punctuation it'd make it easier to read and understand.

You should do more stuff like this, you're pretty good at it ^_^
On May 10th 2007 BillysGirl2005 Said :
BillysGirl2005 I loved it. You should write some more. =)
On May 8th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 That was cool and really interesting!
On April 14th 2007 0GuitarGirl0 Said :
0GuitarGirl0 Wow... that was neat!!
On February 27th 2007 Jizzlenator Said :
Jizzlenator i like it a lot! =)
On February 19th 2007 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet I like it, very interesting... if you ever put anymore stories up like this, let me know...
On February 17th 2007 casey0827 Said :
casey0827 definetely this was just a rough draft of the first chapter of a book i'm writing to rebel against my teachers. thanks for the feedback :)
On February 17th 2007 onaipwolf Said :
onaipwolf I like your idea for a story. Perhaps you could put quotations around people's words, and paragraphs, so it's easier to read, and perhaps expand the content a little.