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The Haunted Cave Ride

Short Created on 10-27-07 Views(126) Story Rating G

  People often talk about the cave ride in Knotts Berry Farm. Some say it's haunted by a boy who died there in some kind of accident, that he haunts a corner near the end of the ride. The ride starts out by going deep into the cave, showing miners, bats and wierd things that grow in there. You go through a series of tunnels and corners before you get to the haunted corner.

  By then, the ride is nearly finished. As you turn the last corner before you go through the last tunnel, there he is. You need to turn and look back at the corner you just passed to see him. He stands on top of a barrel with his hands on his sides, staring down at you with his deep black eyes. That's the only dark thing on him, he glows a faint, pale color. Then you enter the tunnel and watch him watch you until the darkness of the tunnel consumes you.

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On November 5th 2007 cacapoodle Said: 
cacapoodle yea the mines hehe
On November 5th 2007 nockets Said: 
nockets is it in the calico mines???? dude, i'll have to definitely check that out next time...
On October 29th 2007 cacapoodle Said: 
cacapoodle in california
On October 27th 2007 lizzydepp Said: 
lizzydepp omg!! one time me and my friend were on that ride and some girls behind us were freaking out at the end of the ride!!! we were like wtf is their problem??