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Play to Pay: Chapter 3

Drama Created on 3-27-08 Views(145) Story Rating G

Jezie sighed and hung her coat up next to her chair. She rearranged her boa’s position on the back of her chair and headed off to room 4. Most of the rooms had themes, Egyptian, tropical, bondage, but room 4 was her favorite. It was just like a real apartment. Obviously the stove and things like that didn’t work but it had running water and 4 different “rooms”. The kitchen, the bathroom, the bedroom, and the living room.

It made Jez feel like a real person. Someone who was loved. It was rare for room 4 to be used. Most men wanted the bondage room.

“Oh well,” thought Jez, “Lets just get this over with.”

She turned the handle to the room, surprised to see the man already sitting there. Usually they wanted the girl naked on the bed or something like that when they came in. He was sitting on the couch watching the highlights of a football game on television. Sports, one of the few non-pornographic channels the TV actually got.

When he saw her, he immediately stood up, “My name is Olaf.”

The name threw her. She was expecting a strong accent but there wasn’t one. The name was a bit odd, but she could understand him clear as day.

“Hi, I’m Jezebel but I’m sure you already know that.”

“Would you mind if I called you something different? Jezebel makes you sound like some sort of Christian prostitute.”

Jez smiled, “Sure you can call me Jez, Jezie, or anything you want really.”

“Thank you,” Olaf couldn’t believe such a sweet, innocent girl could really be selling her body.

“May I ask you a question,” said Olaf.

“Of course.”

“Why do you sell out your body to strange men?”

Jezie immediately burst into tears. Her mascara ran down her face as she bawled. She attempted to wipe the tears from her eyes without smearing her make-up even worse. Presumably, it didn’t work. Olaf walked over to hear, and using his thumbs, wiped the tears, and makeup, away from her eyes.

“She’s so gorgeous. No. I must remember why I’m here,” thought Olaf to himself.

“So, um… What would you like to do first?”

“Actually Jezie, I’d like to get out of here.”

“Why? Is something not to your liking? We have lots of other rooms. Feel free to change your mind. There are also other girls you might be more suited to.”

“Oh no, its nothing like that. I simply want to talk and I have a suspicion that these rooms are monitored a lot more than customers or employees know about.”

“Well, yes. They start monitoring conversations with video feedback when the employee goes into the bathroom and presses a button letting a manager know everything’s going to start soon.”

“So, you haven’t pressed the button yet?”

“No.”

“Good, what do you say we go out for coffee? I promise nothing more than that.”

“I don’t mind but its against the rules. The money you gave and the contract you have to sign before we start are only good for on these premises.”

“I don’t care. I don’t want sex tonight. I just want to talk. Honest.”

“Well…ok. But here’s the deal. You’ll have to pretend to get very upset with me and walk out. I’ll meet you at The Raven on 24th Avenue in 20 minutes. Deal?”
“Deal.”

Jezebel walked into the bathroom and opened the cabinet under the sink. She lifted her hand right under the basin and felt around until she reached the large button. She pushed it and headed back out into the “living room”. She walked over and began to kiss him. It wasn’t intense or passionate. He pushed her away, not hard mind you, but enough to send her backwards.

“That’s it. This is most certainly not what I paid for. You can just tell your boss to mail me my money back,” Olaf shouted before walking from the room, slamming the door closed behind him.

Jezie couldn’t help but smile to herself. She walked out of the room and heading back to the dressing area. She grabbed her coat and purse and made her way to the door. She pushed open the steel contraption and nodded to Julian, the bouncer who kept watch over the girls’ entrance. She pulled the collar around her face and walked off into the dark abyss, cool night air stirring all around her.

Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed it! 10 Rates for Chapter 4. Remember to Read-Rate-Comment. Also, check out my newest story, Full Moon Rising. As always Constructive Critisim is welcome and appreciated. ~Caiti

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