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I dont love you! 1Authors Comments: Im sorry it's a bit long
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I woke to the annoying sound of my alarm clock. I grab and threw into the wall. My mom knocks at the door.
"Hun what was that" She said coming in
"My alarm clock is broken. I think I need a new one" I said half asleep.
"What Im I going to do with you. I'll get you a new one just get up and get your brothers up and get ready school starts today."
I open my eyes wide open.School. I got up and woke up Pedro and Eddie. I went to my room and fix my hair and make up and put on some really cool clothes. I went down stairs and eat breakfest as I tried running out the door Pedro bump into me.
"Hey sis can I get a ride with you?"
"Sure why not, but Im leaving now."
"Okay just let me get my things."
He ran upstairs and we left. Eddie is out of school and dosn't have to go to school. He never like school but he was smart. As we drive up to school I thought of James again.
"So are you going to try out for football?" I ask Pedro
"Yup"
We got down and we started to walk throught out the halls. I met up with my friends.
"Katie, Marlee, Charleen, Riley, Abby, Erika, Bob, Zack, Chris, and Sharni" I said yelling
Everyone came up to me and hugged me. I havn't seen them in a year.
"We miss you so much" Marlee said to me.
"I miss ya'll to" I said but was then cut off by the bell.
I walk to my first period class. As soon as I walk in I found out I had class with Chris, and Ricardo. I gave Chris a hug as I was talking to him I found out that him and SHarni are going out. I was happy for them. I sat in my chair and saw Ricardo talking to some guy. They both were both pointing and looking at me. I got confuse was they talking about me? I didnt not like. As first period went on I relize that the guy was Westin and that he was very funny he made me laugh a lot. The bell finally rang. I got up but before I did Ricardo camem up to me.
"Hey Vanesa, you know that guy I've been talking to?"
"I dont know him but yes"
"Well he kinda likes you will you want to go out with him?"
"Well like I say I dont know him but I would like to"
"Okay" and walks off.
I was confuse but as my day went on I saw Katie.
"Hey Katie do you know Westin?"
"Yup.Why?"
"Just asking but what is he like?"
"He is something, he likes to be funny in all the type of was. Well as you can see he is cute and well he palys football."
"Oh okay"
"Why do you want to go out with him?"
"Ummm no" I lied
After that conversation. I left. I was to busy thinking that I knock a guy over.
"Oh Im so sorry here let me..."
I knock James to the floor."No its okay" he looks up then turns away.
I was wondering why he turn away. As I look down I relize that my boobs were showing. I put my hand over my shirt and lend him the other.
"Im sorry" I said to him.
"No its okay" he blushed.
We walk to class together relizing we have class together. I sat next to him while Westin sat next to me.
"So whats up James" Westin said to him.
"Nothing much ready for Varsitys game tonight?"
"Yup"
"What arent ya'll good in football. I thought that ya'll will be in Varsity"
"We are and well since that we are not Seniors we cant"
"Oh!"
"So Vanesa you want to be my girlfriend?"
"Ummmm."
I look at him he was so hot and so funny and.....
"Yes"
I might as say yes. I know James for a long time he always look at me as a friend. I turn to look at his face but he wasnt there. He left.
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| On December 19th 2008 Sexican24 Said : | |
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wait so james asked her out? |
| On November 27th 2008 xcarolinachaos Said : | |
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theres alot of mistakes.
some parts dont make sense,but i like it |
| On October 13th 2008 xSarahScandalx Said : | |
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yeah I agree with kitkat298 there are a lot of grammatical errors and use past tense cause its confusing when you don't. just some suggestions to make you story better. but other than that its really really good. keep up the good work. |
| On September 30th 2008 kalenna4 Said : | |
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I love it |
| On September 30th 2008 kitkat298 Said : | |
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there's a lot of grammatical errors but I like this story. I'm gonna subscribe |


