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All the turns in life 30Authors Comments: Hope ya'll like it
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*****9 months later******
We are now waiting for news about Heaven. I got up and start to pace back and forth. Kyle and Rachel were playing with their toy's. I look at them and remember the time I gave birth to them. How that moment was so perfect for me. I snap out when Sam came out with a smile on his face.
"So??" I ask
"It's a boy" he said with excitment.
"Whats his name?"
"Zane"
I smiled and ask if I could go in. Heaven was delighted to see us when we came in. I look to see Zane. He has blond hair and blue eyes. He was so beatuiful. I stared at him for a good while.
*****5 years later*****
"Zane and Rachel stop fighting" I yelled
The kids stop fighting and went back to playing. Heaven walk in.
"Okay Zane lets go" Heaven said to him
"I want to play with Rachel" Zane said
"No lets go"
Heaven kiss me goodbye and left. After she left I call the babysitter. The babysitter came with less than an hour. I told her that I'll be back that I have to make a quick airen. I left her with the kids. It's a cold January as I walk into the cematary. I look up the gaves. I put a white rose on each one. I start to cry.
"It has been 8 years since your pass mother and father. It has been 7 years since your past brother. It has been 6 years since your past Zane. It has been 3 years since your past Joel."
I cry even harder when I said Joel's name. I love him with all my heart and nothing could ruin my love for him. I couldn't stop crying. Why?
"Everyday your kids ask Where's daddy?" I yelled
I slam my fist on the ground. It's start to snow.
"I love you" I said to him.
I close my eyes and start to calm down now my cries were wimpers.
"I love your eyes" Joel said
I turn around and no one was there. I wipe the tear and walk away.
The End
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| On September 29th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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omg |
| On September 27th 2008 kalenna4 Said : | |
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wow |
| On September 27th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Well you didn't mention about Joey dying. Hmm. Oh well this story is great but kmp on any new story. Thanks! ツ |
| On September 27th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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WHAT?? I agree with momoleighann! He died? How? I am going to review past parts of your stories lol but this story is so great written! Love it all! |
| On September 26th 2008 momoleighann Said : | |
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wait a sec..im confused, when did joel die?! |


