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All the turns in life 22

Authors Comments: Okay still Joel's point of view
Drama Created on 9-11-08 Views(60) Story Rating PG13

I was crying on the floor. I dont know what is going to happen to Angel and it's all my fault. I walk to the waiting room. Everyone look up at me and question the look on my face.

"Angel...........ummmm....the mointor started to get a straight line and the doctors kick me out." I fell to floor crying even worse.

My life is going to hell and all cause of me. Why me?Why the hell does this happen to me? I felt a warm hand against my check. I look up It was Aunt El. She look at me with sadden eyes. She was the one who made sure that Kyle and Angel was alright when her parents died. I look over to Zane. Zane look over Angel when Kyle died and I wasn't there for her at all. Aunt El pick me up and hugged me and started to cry. All of us was crying Angel was dead and all we could do was cry. Jamie stood there she had a blank face. She never thought that Angel could die. Angel to her was a real Angel; beatuiful, strong, feirce, and smart. No one thought of her as weak. I saw her death and to me that was the last thing I wanted to see.

"So....what arrre wee gooing to doooo" Jamie broke down.

"Bury her next to Kyle" Uncle Mike said

I couldn't say anything to them but to stand there. I couldnt belive that this was happening no one could. The strongest family was now the weakest. I look at her family and they were all the same but I look at the way back and I saw a girl. She has the eyes of Angel's and the hair....could she be the younger version of Angel, the girl look around the age of sixteen. She saw me look at her and ran away. I couldnt let her go. Who is she? I ran after her and it was raining outside. I stood there for a while and I saw her again. I ran after her as fast as I can.

"Please stop!" I yelled

She kept running. I finally catch up to her. I grab her shoulder and turned her around.

"Angel!?"

She tried to fight back but I was stronger than her.

"Im not Angel!"

"Then who are you?" I ask her.

"Imm...ummm.. Im her sister."

"What do you mean by sister. Angel only had one brother"

"About sixteen years ago Rachel and Adam gave birth to a girl. They didnt want her thinking that two kids were enough. Im Heaven."

"No wonder you look so much like her"

"I came her in heard of my sister was in the hospital. I found out about a week ago that my brother, mother, and father died and the only who was alive was Angel and that she had recently gave birth to twins."

I stared at her there was no way she could be liying I could tell in her eyes.

"Please let me take you back in the hospital and introduce to the family they must know of you."

She didnt argue she followed me in the hospital. As we walk in everyone's eyes look shock. The Aunt El and Uncle Mike stood up.

"Heaven?" They said together.

As soon as they said that the Doctor came out. Zane rush to the doctor.

"I have some very shocking news about Angel."

"What is Doctor?" Aunt El asked

"Somehow someway Angel is still alive but she is still in the coma."

With that news everyone was glad but now the attention was back on Heaven.

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On September 12th 2008 makemebreakme5 Said :
makemebreakme5 wow dhats cOol. update sOon
On September 12th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 wow thats cool
On September 11th 2008 me1is1brittany Said :
me1is1brittany sweet.her sister is keeping her alive huh?
On September 11th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx It's not that short but it's good. :D
On September 11th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx what??? r u freaking serious? is she twin to angel?? I'll definitely find out in next chapter!! i cant wait!! :)
On September 11th 2008 brittvanesa69 Said :
brittvanesa69 Ummm Im sorry it's short