Created By
Rate this Story
Embed
|
+
6
|
I dont love you! 15 |
|
+
4
|
I dont love you! 14 |
|
+
8
|
I dont love you! 13 |
|
+
8
|
I dont love you! 12 |
|
+
11
|
I dont love you! 11 |
|
+
6
|
I dont love you! 10 |
|
+
6
|
I dont love you! 9 |
|
+
3
|
Cursed love 2 |
|
+
9
|
I dont love you! 8 |
|
+
8
|
Cursed love intro 1 |
|
+
8
|
I dont love you! 7 |
|
+
8
|
Cursed love intro |
|
+
8
|
Cursed love Tester |
|
+
6
|
I dont love you! 6 |
|
+
6
|
I dont love you! 5 |
|
+
7
|
I dont love you! 4 |
|
+
8
|
I dont love you! 3 |
|
+
9
|
I dont love you! 2 |
|
+
5
|
I dont love you! 1 |
|
+
5
|
I dont love you! |
|
All the turns in life 21Authors Comments: Remember this is Joel's point of view.
|
I heard a scream and heared something going down the stairs. I walk over to the stairway to find Angel's body laying on the floor. I look upstairs and there I saw Cathy smiling. I rush over to Angel and check if there was even the slightest breath in her body. Yes! she was a bit alive. I reach for my cellphone and called 911.
"911 operater"
"Yes my friend fell down the stairs and I need the ambulence FAST!"
"Okay we'll be there soon"
I hung up and look at Cathy.
"What the hell is wrong with you?"
"Nothing wrong with me. Im your wife and you should be loving me not that whore who is dying in your own hands."
"What the hell are you talking about?"
"DAMN IT are you blind or what? Those babies of Angel's aren't Zane's they are yours"
"Their mine?" I said happily.
I look at Angel she slowly dying in my arms just like with her parents. I start to cry. I didnt want to lose the mother of my childern. I was feeling sad and anger inside of me. I look at Cathy and she is there watching me in pain and dosnt give a damn about what she done. She went in the room of the babies. She had Rachel when she came out.
"What a beatuiful girl she is. Just like her mother."
She carried Rachel in her arms she went closer to the stairs and look at me with a smile.
"I wonder how would you react if I drop her in front of you?"
"You wouldn't dare"
"But I would"
She was at the edge of the stairs and was holding Rachel like she is about to drop her. She pulled Rachel back into her arms.
"HAHAHAHA! It makes me laugh on how much you care for these pooor pathetic babies"
I couldn't belive that Cathy was like this. Was jelousy such a powerful thing that could drive a person to insanity? I heard the sirens, finally they were here. They came in and put Angel on the strecher. As they took her away I went upstairs and got the babies away from Cathy and left for the hospital. On my way out I told the officer to take Cathy away for atempt of murder or maybe even murder. They were confused at first and then I told them what happen. Cathy was trying to resist. She was yelling at them to get her out. I took one last look at her and turn my head away. As I was driving to to the hospital I phone Zane to come to the hospital. He was very angry at me for letting this happen to her and hung up. I got to the hospital and waited outside for any news.
*****3 hour later******
No news and Zane was sleeping on the chair. I grew desperate for any news. I walk up to the counter and ask for news.
"Im sorry sir but we have no news yet."
As she said that I saw the doctor come out.
"Doctor can you please tell what the hell is going on?"
"Yes, Angel has some severe bleeding to the head, couple broken ribs, bruise, and a broken arm. The blow to the head was very severe. Right now she has enter a coma..... we stop the bleeding from her head. "
With those words I stood there and couldnt find the feeling to move my body. I stared to cry. I was hurt with those words. I walk to Zane. Zane was awake now.
"Zane I have some bad news" I said to him.
"What is it" He said coldly
"Angel has entered a coma"
He was silent. He got up and puch the wall as hard as he could and he left a hole in the wall. The nurse look up and look back down. I look at Zane's face he was different his face pale, dark circles underneath his eyes, and I could go on but I dont want to. I ask the nurse if I could go in.
"Are you the husband?" she ask
"No"
"Sorry"
Zane look up at me and went to talk to the nurse. She nod her head.
"You can go in now" Zane said to me as he passes by me.
I was confuse why he did that. I walk to Angels room.
Beep...Beep....Beep I keep hearing. I saw Angel's body. She looked awful. She had brusies all over her body. She had a cast on her arm and a bandage around her head. Se look pale and sad. Never have I seen her like this. I sat next to her.
"You may not be able to hear me,....but I want you to know we are all here Angel, Aunt El, Uncle Mike, Zane, Jamie, Tanner, Alisa, Layna, Jessie, your grandparents, and our babies."I started to cry."Angel, Im so sorry. I didn't meant to hurt you like this" I cryed even worse
Beep...Beep...Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppp.
Then I look up at her. What's going on? Then nurses and doctors rushed in.
"Sir Im going to have to ask you to leave" the nurse said to me.
"What's going on!?Whats wrong!?" I ask
"Sir please leave"
I left.
Please rate and comment
Comments
| On September 10th 2008 CraziiChick208 Said : | |
|
|
omg dont kill her off!! |
| On September 10th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
|
|
Omgggg, don't let her dieeee!!!! I don't want the unhappy ending!!! :( :( aww that sucka! Don't let her die!! |
| On September 10th 2008 momoleighann Said : | |
|
|
nooooooo!!!!!!u cant let angel die damnit!!!!!!1 |
| On September 10th 2008 brittvanesa69 Said : | |
|
|
I hurried up cause I kno that u want to kno wat happens next so I'm doin my best to hurry and end this story but from the looks of it it will b a while.
|
| On September 10th 2008 kalenna4 Said : | |
|
|
wow |


