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All the turns in life 11

Drama Created on 8-21-08 Views(86) Story Rating PG13

"I'll shot you like you did to my father" she whispered in my ear.

I heard Zane gulp. I was starring at Joel. I saw his expression sadden. I could hear Kyle breathing harder and faster. I closed my eyes hoping for the best. I elbowed Danna in the gut. She drop one of her guns on the floor. I rush over to Kyle. I quickly got the sheet on Kyle's bed and wrape it around Kyle's chest. I slowly put him on my shoulder. Thank God I did weight lifting in football. I hurried down stairs not carring about anyone else. I got the keys and went out the door. I got in the fastest car we had. I then layed Kyle in the back seat. I look for a gun and headed back inside the house. I went upstairs and open the door. Joel had Danna covered. I help Zane get up. He quickly put his arm around my neck and tried to walk down the stairs. We got to the car and I open the passanger door and let him in. He close the door behind me. I rush over to the driver seat and started the car and rush out. As we speed through a cop catch me speeding and now was behind me. I call 911.

"911 what is your emergancy?"

"Uh yes my brother been shot and also my friend Im going to the hospital now. Thats not the problem though. The shoter is still at my house with another friend please go over there now. I think she is still armed but if not she is still dangerous. PLEASE!"

"Ok Mam, I need to know where she is at?"

"She is at 2104 Valley Hills Road. Please hurry."

"Ok stay calm and we'll be there in about no more than 10 minutes."

"Ok. Bye"

I hung up and look at the rear view mirror. Damn it now there is more police on us. I press the gas a little harder now.

"Haha. This is very funny Angel" Zane said smiling at me.

I turn to look at him. Is he crazy?

"Um How is this funny?"

"Think about"

I thought about it now. I still didn't get it but I ignore it. I was finally reaching the hospital. Then all the sudden the police cut me off the parking lot. I slamed the brakes.

"Get out of the veichel with your hands behind your head" the police yells.

I got out." I have two people dying in my car right now. One of them is my brother . Please let us go in. I have to get them in NOW!!!!" I start to cry now.

They put there guns down not sure if I was telling the truth. One police officer was rushing towards the car to make sure I was telling the truth. He look inside and saw my brother bleeding to death. He then look over to Zane.

"Hello officer" He said smiling and pointed to his leg.

"Let them go through" he signal them

I got back in the car and rush through the parking lot. A couple of officers help with my brother and Zane. I was walking in between them. I was holding both of their hands.

"Go with you brother. I'll be fine" Zane said weakly

"You try to be the hero to much" I crack a smile for him

He laugh and let go of my hand. I went with my brother. They took him to surgery as soon as he entered the room. The nurse told me to wait outside. I sat in the waiting room. I couldn't stop from crying. What happens if I lose him. I slowly started to close my eyes.

I cant close my eyes and I slowly I blackout.

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On August 21st 2008 heartlovekiss Said :
heartlovekiss Ohhh that's good!
On August 21st 2008 momoleighann Said :
momoleighann what did zane mean? good job!
On August 21st 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 wow its good