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"Reminds you of anthing Angel?" She said grinning
I look up at her. It reminds me a lot of that night. I stood there shock of what I was seeing again. My brother dying and my best friend hurt. I look away and close my eyes and reopen them to find that I was waking up from a nightmare but I didnt wake up. I look back at her.
"Haha. I thought you've figure it by now but from te looks at it you dont."
"What are you talking about?" I said crying.
"That Im here for revenge"
"Revenge?"
"Yes. You are the girl that kill my father. You whore you shot him in the head. "she started to cry.
"Father? and how you know that?"
"I was there. I was looking through the window. Daddy told me to wait outside and that he'll be out in a couple of minutes. I was worried so I peek through the window. I saw him kneel down. Then I looked up the stairs and saw you holding a gun and fired. I watch the entire thing with my own eyes. I saw my dad's death right in front of me." She stop crying
"How do you think I felt when your dad kill my parents? Not just one but both..........and look now you are taking away my brother, you hurt my friend but most of all you are hurting yourself."
She didn't respond.I fell to the floor. I look up and now she was in front of me pointing the gun to my head.
"You took the only thing I had"
As she was about to pull the trigger. I heard a noise behind her. She didn't relize that Zane was getting up. I stayed calm. I saw him walking slowly to her. She smiled and turn around and pointed the gun at Zane.
"Dont think that you can fool me" She said
He froze and just as shock as I was. She then went in her shirt and pull out another gun. She had planned this very well. She laugh hysterical. For a mintue I thought she was good now I think she is crazy. I look at my brother. He dosnt look like he's gonna make it. I start to worry even more. How can I get my brother at the hospital in time? I look around. I saw something move out the window. I couldnt tell what it was. Then all the sudden I saw a face. Could it be Joel? I stood in silence and focus really hard. I heard a window open. It was so faint but I could hear.
"Who the hell are you?" Danna ask
I turn around. I saw Joel standing at the door.
"Joel!" I cryed
He smile at me. He look at Danna now.
"Answer me who the hell are you?" Danna yelled
"Im a friend" He said smiling
I saw him holding something I couldnt make it out. He slowly raised the object. Danna was shock and grab me and pull me in front of her and pointed the gun to my head. I could feel the barrel of the gun. It was warm and ready to fire at me.
"I'll shoot you like you did to my father"She whispered in my ear.
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| On August 21st 2008 kalenna4 Said : | |
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wow its good |
| On August 21st 2008 brittvanesa69 Said : | |
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Sorry it was short |


