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All the turns in life introAuthors Comments: Sorry it's long. This story will get better.
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I've always thought that life ways hard ,but its not its only hard cuase we make it. Im only seventeen years old how should I know? I have older brother name Kyle and he's eighteen, he basically loves football, shooting, hunting,fishing, and well all kinds of stuff. Me and him are the same so I like all the stuff he likes. My dad is the same. He loves hunting and he is very good at it, he never misses. My mother almost but she dosn't like using guns. She likes using the Bow and Arrow. She is very good with guns but she dosn't like them.
I have brown hair and grey blue eyes like my mom. My brother has brown hair and green eyes like my dad. My family is a bit rich. I dont like to be call rich cause to me money is just a waste of trees. I love racing cars and dirt bikes with my brother. My mom thinks I should be more like a lady but I dont listen to her. Me and my mom dont get along as well as me and my dad.
"Hey Hun, would you like to race with me?" my dad ask.
"I love to." I turn off the TV and went down stairs with him.
"Rachel, Im taking Angel and Kyle to the track be back in an hour."Dad said walking past her.
"Ummm....I think Angel should stay with me?"She said smiling to my dad.
"Ugh.Ok, but please dont fight," he pleaded my mom. Then kiss her and walk out of the kitchen.
"What is it, Mother?"
"Dont use that tone with me and well I think you need to start hangning out with me."
"I wont. You and I have nothing in commom but are looks!" I yelled at her and went to the garage. Where all the cars, trucks, motorcycles, dirt bikes, and four wheelers were. I put a helmet and took the keys to the motorcycle and left. I speed through the streets not caring if I get pulled over. I just rode and I didnt know where I was going all I know is that I wanted to get out of the house. Away from my mom. I feel bad that I yelled at her, but I just didnt like being with her. It was getting dark so I turned around and went back home. I arrived to my mom and dad yelling at each other. They turn around and stared at me. My mom mad as hell. I could guess that my dad was standing up for me. I went upstairs and didn't said a word to them. They didn't said a word to me either. I shut my door and thats when they start to argue again. I was tired of all this. I took off my clothes and took a shower. I came out and put my robe on it was 2 in the morning. I wonder how long I was in the shower? I heard a noise down stairs and thought it was either mom or dad, Kyle is a hevy sleeper. I then heard my mom and dad going down stairs. Then who is down stairs? I open the door and saw my mom with her gun and my dad with his.
"Stop!or I'll shot!"my dad yell to the robber. The robber didn't stop and my dad shot him in the leg."Rachel, Call the police."
My mom turn around then thats when I heard another gun shot but it wasnt from my dad it was from the robber. I was shock. I just stood there. The damn bastard shot my mom. My dad went over to my mom forgetting about the robber. For the first time I saw my dad cryed.
"Rachel, please dont leave me!" He was holding my mothers lifeless body in his arms.
Again another shot was fired by the same man. Now he shot my dad. I couldnt take it, but I couldn't move. I finally snap back. I ran to my room and grab my pistol.
"Die you mother fucker!" I said crying full of anger and rage. I shot him in the head. I fell on my knees crying. My brother came out as soon as heard me fired the gun. He saw me crying on the floor with a gun in my hands. He look down stairs and saw our parents body on the floor. Then look at the guy dress in black. He call the police. The police came and ask questions.
"Mame, Did you kill your parents?"one of them ask me.
"What kind of sick bastard ask that question? And NO! I'D NEVER EVER IN MY LIFE WOULD KILL MY PARENTS!!!!"
"Sorry."
"Please my sister witness the muder of our parents."
"OK. I"ll be here tomarrow."The police man said.Then he left.
I couldn't sleep. I kept having the same flashback. I was scared,sad, and mad! My brother was holding me the whole intire time. Not letting me go. Then I fell to sleep with those painful nightmares.
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| On August 21st 2008 kalenna4 Said : | |
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wow i forgot to read the info before the storie |
| On August 21st 2008 Brooklyn2sista Said : | |
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i like it alot is aesome |
| On August 6th 2008 HidexAndxSeek Said : | |
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i like it..
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| On August 6th 2008 momoleighann Said : | |
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i like it a lot, ur a good writer. |


