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Authors Comments: RRCS && NJoY!
Drama Created on 11-14-08 Views(165) Story Rating PG13

I was still very weak from the accident but after a few days I was coming around pretty good. My parents were there everyday checking on me because they had both taken a few days off work. My sister came every other day so she could keep up with her work.

“Hey so what about a private nurse?” My father asked the doctor.

“Daddy!” I yelled.

“Baby… we cant afford a private nurse remember?” My mother said to him.

My dad’s facial expression changed. I guess he was still thinking he could spend as much as he wanted whenever he wanted.

“Its fine daddy. I don’t need a private nurse… besides, if I’m home then you guys are gonna go back to work and leave me all alone.” I said trying to lighten the mood.

“yeah I guess.” My dad said.

“Hey, lets go get some lunch.” My mom said to my daddy. “We’ll bring you something back.” She said to me.

“Okay that’s fine.” I replied.

“Okay, we’ll be back in about half an hour.”

“okay.”

They left and I began reading a book that Anita brought me. I actually liked it. It was about a girl who was so spoiled by her dad that he gave her everything she wanted. Then she started disobeying him and disrespecting him. I’m on the part now where her boyfriend is telling her that a crooked cop killed her father. It’s really sad…

[knock knock!]

“Come in!”

I looked up and saw the very last person I wanted to see at that point. Sean.

“What?!” I yelled toward the doorway.

“I just… wanted- I mean needed to see you… to make sure you’re okay.” He stuttered.

“I’m fine. Bye!” I yelled again without missing a beat.

He came in and shut the door behind him. “please talk to me. I feel terrible. I feel so fuckin’ bad and I know why…but…”

“But what? Ran out of people to take advantage of? How sad… Get out!”

“I’m sorry Mia! Okay? I’m so sorry. It’s not like me and I know I fucked up but… I’m sorry.”

“Oh yeah? Sorry huh? Well guess what, sorry don’t mean shit. Sorry aint helpin me out of this hospital bed. Sorry wont give me my virginity back. Sorry don’t take the pain away. Sorry? Fuck sorry!”

He was quiet.

“Nothing to say huh? Good. Now get the fuck out of me room before I have to get security on your ass!”

He didn’t waste anytime getting out of my face. I was glad he got the point because I was holding back the tears and as soon as the door shut behind him I let them go.

 

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So who knows what book she was reading in this chapter? Whoever wins gets to choose whether they want Sean and Mia to get back together or not. First guess is the winner!!!!

And when you guess send me a message with your choice because I want it to be a suprise to everybody else how the couple turns out.

 

 

 

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On November 16th 2008 DayDream21 Said :
DayDream21 its diamond.!!! write more please
On November 16th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 ooooooohhh shnap it's 'diamond'!!haah i knew it sounded familiar!
On November 14th 2008 CraziiChick208 Said :
CraziiChick208 OMGG LYNN HURRY MOREE.YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME!
On November 14th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 This story is cool
On November 14th 2008 UPTmrscarter93 Said :
UPTmrscarter93 hmmmmm that story she is reading sounds soooooo familiar!!! lol. thanks for the props! i love this chapter! and i want shawn and mia back together but then again, idk...
On November 14th 2008 kiss4nutn Said :
kiss4nutn Diamond? Love ITTTTTT!
Or is it this story???? Hmmmmmm.
On November 14th 2008 crankdatshit94 Said :
crankdatshit94 'Diamond'!!!! loved it!