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Start of something new[09]

Authors Comments: RRCS && TMWYT!
Creative Created on 11-10-08 Views(174) Story Rating PG

Beep… Beep… Beep…

So this is what the end looks like?

“… So is she… I mean will she… wake up?”

The voice seemed so far away, but I recognized it instantly. Daddy?

I heard myself say it but for some reason I had a feeling he couldn’t hear me.

I wanted to cry but who would see my pain?

“… and that’s really all I can say so far. It’ll take a miracle. Lets pray for one.” I heard a feminine voice say.

I then heard a door closing and that made me believe she was gone.

The faint crying sounded like my mothers, and although I couldn’t hear her, I knew my sister was there too.

“This is all my fault.” Daddy said. “If I would have just told her to come home…”

Nobody said a word. Why the hell isn’t anyone saying anything?

I wanted so badly to tell them that I loved them, but I couldn’t.

I drifted out of the conversation and it felt as I was being pulled into a different direction. I wanted to scream but who would hear me?

Instead I watched the different colors form and all the different swirls captivated me. Then…

I slowly blinked my eyes open. I saw daddy, mommy, and Anita too!

I couldn’t talk and they didn’t even see that my eyes had opened. I tried to smile but it hurt to smile. It hurt to see those pained expressions on everyone’s face the most. They all looked so… depressed.

My Dad was leaned up against the wall and was looking up at the ceiling. My mother had her eyes covered with her hands as she sobbed into them. And then Nita was… looking right at me?

She beamed with excitement as she ran up to me and hugged me.

My dad still didn’t see that I was awake because she was blocking his view of me.

“Nita what are you…” His voice trailed off as he came over and looked me in the eyes. “Baby you’re awake!” He threw his arms around me too and at that moment my mother shot up from her crying.

“Oh my…” She looked up at the ceiling. “Thank you!”

 

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Sorry this one is so short. I've neglected this story and I'm really sorry for those of you who like it. I got a little side tracked!

But tomorrow, there's no school and guess who's gonna post EXTRA chapters just for you?!?!?!

=D

[that goes for ALL my stories]

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On November 10th 2008 jessi9509runit Said :
jessi9509runit kmp
On November 10th 2008 DayDream21 Said :
DayDream21 she thought she was dead. can't wait.
On November 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess yes extra chapters!!!!!
On November 10th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 ZAAANNNGGGG I LUUHHH DIS STORY!!!(and your others) =]
On November 10th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 I love this story
On November 10th 2008 CraziiChick208 Said :
CraziiChick208 AWESOME :]CANT WAIT TILL TOMORROW!
On November 10th 2008 UPTmrscarter93 Said :
UPTmrscarter93 LOVED IT AND YAY ME FIRST TO COMMENT!!!