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Oops! The rubber broke [intro]

Authors Comments: RRCS && NJoY!
Drama Created on 10-9-08 Views(569) Story Rating PG13

Isn’t high school supposed to be fun? Huh? No answer? Well let me be the first to tell you it’s not! Not only did my friends from middle school turn on me because of a guy, but then one of them started dating that guy as soon as he dumped me.

Before this day- or should I say- before this experience, I loved my high school days. People liked talking to me, and they were all cool.

I didn’t have one complaint. I was pretty, popular, and I had style that some people wished they had. So… maybe that’s why Craig liked me?

I don’t know! I’m so confused right now. To say I’m the least bit concerned about the outcome of this little trip I’m making is an understatement.

Where am I going you ask? Don’t laugh!

… I’m going to the clinic.

It’s a long story and I really wanna give you all the details. But right now, I’m pretty much only concerned with the results of my blood test.

While I’m waiting, I guess I can tell you the moment when my high school experience became a nightmare.

If I recall correctly, I think it was when Craig was in my bed and he was on top of me… and he… paused?

When I asked him what was wrong, he looked confused… Scared even. He looked me in the eyes while he was still inside me… “Oops… the rubber broke” Was all he said.

“Maria Logan?” The receptionist called. Breaking me out of my thoughts.

That’s me. I walked into the room where the woman in blue was leading me… If you don’t mind, I’d rather do this alone.

But hey, if you thought this portion of my life were crazy… wait ‘til you hear the results!

 

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This is the intro to my new story. RATE && COMMENT! Its not just gonna be a drama. It has a little bit of everything. Comedy/creative / tradegy/ romance / party... ALL of it! So tell me if I should continue...

 

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On October 16th 2008 toni2006 Said :
toni2006 i love it its really good so far
On October 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess lol. I like the name Craig, and i can't believe all he said was 'oops...the rubber broke' lol!
On October 10th 2008 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 Wow I love how the story is written already! I agree completely with Ashley2008!
On October 9th 2008 Ashlev2008 Said :
Ashlev2008 i love how the story is written. Its like ur actually revealing some deep secret or something also i love the emotion, you can really tell that the character is feeling regretful about what happened. And last i loved the foreshadowing and naming of the story. So all in all its AWESOME!! Please keep me posted ^^
On October 9th 2008 Ashlev2008 Said :
Ashlev2008 i love how the story is written. Its like ur actually revealing some deep secret or something also i love the emotion, you can really tell that the character is feeling regretful about what happened. And last i loved the foreshadowing and naming of the story. So all in all its AWESOME!! Please keep me posted ^^
On October 9th 2008 naenae765 Said :
naenae765 Love it. more please.
On October 9th 2008 suicidalcowgrl Said :
suicidalcowgrl I ♥ this story it is awesome keep it coming please
On October 9th 2008 MandiPandi2 Said :
MandiPandi2 loved it kmpp
On October 9th 2008 DayDream21 Said :
DayDream21 continue please. i like it. kmp
On October 9th 2008 anabellemarie Said :
anabellemarie really good so far. keep them comingg
On October 9th 2008 MiSSBoSSAAYxDD Said :
MiSSBoSSAAYxDD not bad..... plz continue
On October 9th 2008 RaGgLe0407 Said :
RaGgLe0407 please continue
On October 9th 2008 CraziiChick208 Said :
CraziiChick208

continue pleaseeeeeeeee!!

On October 9th 2008 UPTmrscarter93 Said :
UPTmrscarter93 CONTINUE!!! I LOVE IT~~!!!
On October 9th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 cool
On October 9th 2008 C00k1i3 Said :
C00k1i3 I like this alot. Keep me posted!? Thanx!
On October 9th 2008 babygurl82491 Said :
babygurl82491 REALLY good so far
On October 9th 2008 tigerhottie211 Said :
tigerhottie211 I Love It So Far =)
On October 9th 2008 Melly82092 Said :
Melly82092 wowzers, i really like it so far! i cant wait to hear the rest!!!!! -melrose
On October 9th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh i like it so far