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By the time me and Kyle left his house it was going on nine. I had decided to stay for dinner at his house because his mom insisted on it. She was really cool and I found myself loving everything about her. Kyle's dad had divorced his mom about 5 years earlier and from what Kyle told me, he was a drunk and they didnt get along. I didnt question him about it, I just let him change the subject. I know how life was for me to grow up with sn abusive father, so i didnt want anyone to question me either.

Kyle- So... How was dinner?

I laughed because I knew thats not what he really wanted to ask me.

Kyle- whats so funny?

Niara- Dinner was great. But I know you just want me to tell you how I feel about your mom.

He smiled. My guess was that he was thinkin the same thing I was thinkin. "She know me too damn well"

Kyle- well?

Niara- I love her. Shes amazing.

I saw a look of relief flash across his face. On the ride to my house he made sure to remind me to at least try to get along with Donisha.

No fuckin way. That lil' bitch wanna have a attitude, den she can get her ass beat.

I smiled at my thoughts and began to tune him out.

Kyle- are you listening to me Nini?

Niara- Yea boo, im listening... And I'll try. I will.

He nodded and left it alone. He walked me in my house, stayed for about 10 minutes, and then left.

Travis- Damn, where you been at?

Niara- I stayed for dinner at Kyle's... Where's mommy?

Travis- She's sleep. India is too.... and...

I could tell that something was wrong by the way he paused like that.

Niara- And? And what? whats wrong?

Travis- Dad's sleep too

I could'nt even begin to describe what those words did to my insides. It seemed like we could'nt get away from the drama. My mom and dad get seperated all the time, and just when you think shes too fed up to tolerate it anymore, she goes right back to him.

Travis- you ok Ni?

Niara- Im fine... Im going to bed

Travis- Ok

Before letting me go up the stairs he grabbed me and gave me a hug. Thats the bueaty of having a twin, they always know how you feel.

Travis- trust me, we gon be fine

Niara- hope so

Travis- know so

I nodded and walked up the stairs. I was trying not to make any noise because I didnt wanna wake anyone up. When I got in my room India was on my bed sleeping, and I knew why. The last time she had seen our father, he and my mom had gotten into it really bad and in the mist of the fight, he had accidently hit India. Since then she had grown scared of him.

I decided to let her sleep with me for the night, no matter how much of a pain in the ass she was, at the end of the day she was still my little sister and I loved her. And there was no way in hell I'd let my father scare her to death again.

I shut and locked my door, went over to my dressor and pulled out some shorts and a tanktop. I went into my bathroom, turned the shower on, got undressed and hopped in. When i got out I put on my pajamas and went to go get in the bed. My little sister woke up.

India- Does mommy love daddy Ni?

Niara- Of Coarse she does. But when you love someone, its not always best to be with them.

India- I dont like him

Niara- I know you dont, just dont let him get to you. He'll be gone soon. Now go to sleep.

India turned over and drifted off to sleep. After about 10 minutes, I did the same.

Next morning

I woke up, got dressed and started picking out my clothes for the day. I decided on my black mini skirt, a green tube top and my green flats that i'd never gotten the chance to wear. After picking out my outfit, and brushing my teeth and washing my face, I woke my litte sister up and walked her to her room to help her pick out an outfit for school. I was sure my mom would forget now that dad was home. After pulling out a green and white dress that stopped at her mid-thigh and some green flip flops for her to wear, I brushed and greased her long black hair straight back and put a green head band on her head and sent her down stairs for breakfast.

After getting myself dressed I was on my way downstairs to come face to face with the man who seems to purposely dedicate his life to runing ours. He didnt even earn the name dad from me, instead I call him by his first name, Nelson.

Nelson- Hello Niara.

Niara- Hello Nelson.

I saw the shock quickly come and go across his face at my words. They were so bitter and you could cut the tension with a knife. He looked different though. He had a nice shape up, and the bags that used to be so visible under his eyes were no longer there. His skin looked smooth and his clothes were neat. He'd actually taken the time to shave, whice made him look younger than 40, he could pass for 30 with this new look.

Nelson- how've you been?

Niara- Peachy

Mom- Niara!

I shot her a look that let her know I didnt give a damn. This man standing in front of me may have been my father, but I didnt choose him as one, and I shouldnt have to show him any respect that he hadnt earned. He was as important to me as the mailman, and he'd get treated as such until he got the message.

Travis and India were already sitting at the table having waffles, bacon, and eggs. I sat down and ate until I heard Kyle knock at the door. I went to go open it.

Kyle- Hey!

He reached out and gave me a hug.

Niara- Hey...

Kyle- Whats wrong?

Kyle came in and headed toward the kitchen to say hey to everyone. My mother and my little sister loved Kyle. Travis thought he was cool as hell, and Kyle felt the same. But I didnt want Kyle to meet Nelson. I didnt want him to meet the man I hated. But it was too late, he was already in there.

Mom- Hey Kyle

India- Hey Kyle

Travis- wassup man

I grabbed my purse and then ran and grabbed kyle's arm trying to get him to the door fast.

Niara- C'mon guys lets go, we dont wanna be late.

Travis saw what I was trying to do and he got up fast and headed to the door.

Nelson- wait a minute, who's this?

Niara- none of your business, you'll be gone by the time we get home so there's no point in giving an introduction

Nelson- who said I was leaving?

Niara- Dont matta. Be gone, or it will be a problem.

I turned to my mother and felt the anger building up more and more.

niara- Mommy, if he's here when I get home then Im gone. And I mean it. India's scared shitless of him. She slept in my room last night just cuz he was here.

Mom- Nini you're over reacting.

I turned back to Nelson and repeated myself

Niara- Be gone!

When me Travis and Kyle were back in the car Kyle was confused.

Kyle- So im guessing that was-

Niara- -my father

Kyle- right

 

 

 

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I am sooo sorry it took so long, I was on vaca and I didnt have anytime to write. But trust me I will make it up to you. Ive decided to twist the story around a little bit and put a little more drama into it. As you can see, ive already began with that. But the best is yet to come. LOL. Any wayz Read/ rate/ and comment. I will not keep anyone posted after this, so be sure to subscribe.

THANXX!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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On July 30th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess yeah, i thought he slapped her but it was just the look on his face. im nice to my dad, but hes kinda like that but without the hitting of kids and getting back together, he wanted to but hes gone for good. living with me and my mom, wise. anyway i will subscribe.