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Drama Created on 6-19-08 Views(231) Story Rating G

"Tie her up" chris said as he glared down at me on the floor.

"I need some tape" Liz said.

"Well go get some!" he said raising his voice at her.

"You do it!"

"Why would I do it?" He said getting a little louder."

I was getting irritated. I couldnt think with them going at it like this.

"It doesnt matter who does it, im gonna wind up tied up reguardless of who goes to get the tape so just get it!" I yelled.

They had stopped argueing and were looking at me with weird eyes. "Fine I'll get it. But watch her" Chris said so Liz.

She nodded. I noticed that she was still holding the long metal bar that she had hit chris in the head with at 1st so I quickly thought up a plan.

It has to work. I thought to myself.

As soon as chris disapeared into the kitchen I smirked up at Liz.

"What are you looking at?" she asked.

"You!" I said.

"Why?" she asked dumbfounded.

I laughed. "Because you are so stupid"

I was quick with what I did next. I tripped her up and grabbed the bar out of her hand. As she fell backward I hit her in the head with it. She was out cold. I dragged Jamal to the bedroom and locked the door behind me. I ran over to the fuse box to cut off all the lights in the whole house.

"What the hell?!?" was what I heard Chris say as the lights went off.

I quickly grabbed my cell phone from off the bed and dialed 911.

"911 what is your emergency?"

I spoke fast realizing I didnt have much time as I heard banging at the door.

"Um, someone is in my house trying to kill me and my husband. Please Please Please get here fast. They are crazy. If you dont come NOW were gonna die!" I said.

"Mam, calm down. were sending help now." the woman on the other end of the phone said. "Just stay on the line"

"Ok"

more banging was comming from the door and I could tell that it would soon break. I pulled Jamal into the bathroom and locked that door too, being sure not hang up the phone by accident.

I turned on the light so I could get a good look at him. He was still breathing but he needed an ambulance and I was determined he would get one.

Within seconds I heard the bedroom door break open and my body shook with fear. I dragged Jamal into the tub and quickly turned out the lights.

"Mam, the police have arrived" I heard through the phone just moments before the bathroom door came flying open. Chris Yanked me out of the bathroom and threw me onto the bed.

"You think you funny? you thought you could get away?" He said before slapping me across the face.

I heard banging at the door and I knew the police were gonna break in soon. I looked toward the window and then back at him.

"You dont have to do this?" I said.

"Oh no, but I want too"

He pulled a knife out of his back pocket and my eyes widened.

"aHHHHHH" I screamed. At that precise moment I heard the front door being broken into. The knife swung down and I rolled over fast, but not fast enough. It cut me in my side, not deep, but it hurt.

"Freeze!" I heard the policeman say.

Chris Laughed. "Now why would I wanna do a silly thing like that"

It was as if everything after that moved in slow motion. Chris pulled a gun out of his back pocket, and just as he was about to shoot the policeman, the policeman shot him three times in the chest.

"Are you alright miss?"

You mean besides from being emotionally traumatized for life? "Yes... my husband is in the bathroom. He needs an ambulance"

The policeman nodded and signaled for his back up to go check on him.

I looked down and saw the blood dripping from the side of my stomach. "Oh my god!" I said.

I put my hand over it and showed him the blood.

"wow, that looks pretty bad. the ambulance outside can stitch you up."

"No you dont understand, IM PREGNANT!"

His eyes widened and I didnt like the feeling that was rushing through my body. I was more concerned with what was gonna happen to my baby. I passed out.

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*Hours later*

I was in the hospital lying on the bed and a nurse walked in.

"well, its nice to see those eyes open."

I looked down and I still saw a little lump in my stomach and was relieved.

"You didnt lose your baby. You went through alot though, It was a struggle. We stitched you up pretty good. and you should be good as new in a week or so. Just take it easy and get some rest."

I nodded.

"Where's my husband?"

"He's just fine as well. he woke up about an hour ago and asked about you, I'll send him in shortly." she said walking out.

about 5 minutes later Jamal walked in and I felt my heart flutter.

"Hey baby. How are you feeling?" He said comming over and kissing me.

"Im feeling okay."

"You saved both of our asses back there"

I didnt say anything. I just nodded.

"Whats wrong"

I still didnt say anything.

"Tasha?"

"I thought you were-"

"-I know, but im not"

We kissed again and then a police officer came in. "I'd like to ask you two some questions.

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Liz went to jail and was charged with attempted murder, black male, and a few other charges that had nothing to do with us.

Tasha delivered her beautiful baby boy 7 months later and Jamal adopted him as his own. They named him Isaiah Jamal.

They renewed their vows shortly after Isaiah's birth and simply leaving the past in the past.

The end.

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Check out my New story Hood StaR!!

Thanxx!

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On June 28th 2008 pinkheffalump Said :
pinkheffalump this is one of the GOOD happy endings. some are corny, some are crappy, but this one is fantabulous. :]
On June 24th 2008 jessi9509runit Said :
jessi9509runit that was good
On June 20th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute good story! =)
On June 20th 2008 cassiecat1221 Said :
cassiecat1221 this story was great i loved the ending.
On June 20th 2008 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox Awh nice ending. I was about to comment you about the baby dying but never mind (:
On June 20th 2008 RalRasper Said :
RalRasper THats what it Do
On June 20th 2008 moosegurl01 Said :
moosegurl01 kmpp on your new story plz =]
On June 19th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh kmp on future stories...it was really good
On June 19th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Good story♥
On June 19th 2008 me1is1brittany Said :
me1is1brittany Kmpp on the new story.
On June 19th 2008 RJbork09 Said :
RJbork09 Aww. I loved the story.
On June 19th 2008 nickynicole901 Said :
nickynicole901 i love this ending..
On June 19th 2008 ilybaby06 Said :
ilybaby06 I love it!!! I'm glad Chris is dead (:
KMP on the new story please!!
On June 19th 2008 CraziiChick208 Said :
CraziiChick208 KMPP ON THE NEW STORY PLEASE!