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Intense Lover pt 1 chap 2
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My plan seemed less and less likely everyday I took towards my birthday. My bestfriend's didnt even know what I was up to, I couldnt just walk around during the day plotting someone's death. It had to be right, It had to work out so that no fingers could be pointed to me in the end. I was'nt trying to end up on the 9 o'clock news. I could picture it now, "colloge student on a crazy rampage of killing spree's after the loss of her parents when she was a child. Can this be considered Insanity?"
No No NO! I refuse to be that person. I mean yeah I was angry, and yeah I wanted revenge, but damn it i had a right to.
My two bestfriend's Sarah and Troy decided two months ago that they were going to use my birthday as a way to get a lot of stress out of everyone's system. Since graduation I've been attending college and majoring in Physcology. Everyone has been really stressed and I agreed that they could have their little party, but only because it went along with my plans perfectly.
My only condition was that I had to have a partial say in the guest list. Everything else that went on was beyond my control.
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The night of the party I was a little nervous. I had to have on the perfect outfit, and I had to have the right attitude to make him want me. If I do say so myself, Im sexy. Im not just saying that to be full of myself, Im saying it because I have never had a guy turn me down. I either can make them want me for that moment or I can make them want me as their girl for life, but I have never been turned down.
I got my Hazel eyes from my father, and my perfect lips from my mother. I didnt get my dimples from either of them though, I guess I just got lucky. My long hair came from my mother also, she was half puerto Rican.
Like I said My looks work for me. Around 11 o'clock, I noticed Jalil walk through the doors. I kept my distance and kept my eye on him before I made my move. He was actually kinda sexy. I found myself becomming more and more intrigued by him. The way he walked, the way the way he danced, the way he smiled.
I walked across the floor and got a drink. Troy hired his cousin as a bartender so the whole "Must be 21 to get drinks" thing was over ruled- at least for the night. I put the drink down and say some guys dancing around the edge of the dance floor and I pulled one over to the middle of the floor. I started dancing in my freakum dress and I had alot of people impressed. The guy I was dancing with seemed to get more and more riled up just by the way I swayed my hips to the music.
After that first dance, I noticed Jalil looking at me. I had him hooked. Now all I had to do was be the classy, smart, and funny girl I knew I could be and I'd be his girl. Out of the corner of my eye I noticed him walking over to me. I turned his way and gave him a seductive smile. By the way he looked back at me I could tell it turned him on.
"So you're the birthday girl huh?"
"Yea, How'd you know?"
"Because it would take alot of courage for someone to steal the show at someone else's birthday party."
"And If it wasnt my birthday what would you have said?" I asked.
"I would still be comming over to ask you to dance." He said holding out his hand. I accepted it and we made our way back to the dance floor.
I danced with him for the next three songs before we went to go get drinks. I was getting overheated and I told him I was going outside for a little bit. He offered to go with me. When we were outside the cool air going through my lungs felt so good.
"So what's your name?" I asked as if I didnt know.
"Jalil, and your's?"
"Destiny, but everyone calls me Dess"
"Well listen Dess, I've gotta run, I told my friends I'd meet them later. But I'd like to see you again."
"Do you have a cell phone on you?"
He took the phone out and I put my home and cell numbers in it. He gave me a hug and took off to the parking lot.
But not before saying "I'll be in touch."
And I had no doubts that he would be.
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| On July 27th 2008 xxxshylaxxx Said : | |
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omg all of ur storys r good!!!!!!!! i love it kmp!!! |
| On April 3rd 2008 justthegirlxox Said : | |
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ha, i like her. keep me posted please. |
| On April 3rd 2008 Equasha Said : | |
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she's gud! plz keep me posted |
| On April 2nd 2008 sportshottie4e Said : | |
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hmmm sounds interesting kmp
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| On April 2nd 2008 xashleyrosex Said : | |
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kmp |
| On April 2nd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Kmp. =) |
| On April 1st 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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hmmm i like it kmp |
| On April 1st 2008 brokenwings122 Said : | |
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Interesting...kmp. |


