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Intense Lover pt 1 chap 1
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When I was younger, both my parents were killed by a crazy man with a 9mm. They were comming out of the store and walking towards the car when he came up behind them and shot them in the head. It happened right in front of me. I was in the car listening to music, I was just about to unlock the door as they got closer. For an 11 year old this cold winter night was tragic to me. It damn near took over my teen years, and could have ruined my life. Over the years my life was somewhat dreary, Everynight I had nightmares and my grandparents thought that I was losing my mind. That night slowly faded out of my mind but one detail never died. The moment the killer looked into the car, into my eyes. I never forgot his eyes. They were the eyes of a physco.
When I was 17, graduation day, I saw the man again. The man who killed my parents. He looked the same, but somehow different. He had those eyes. Im not sure if he knew who I was or if he even recognzed me at all, but he stared intensly.
He looked to be around 39 or 40 I could read ages like a dictionary. I thought to myself If he's here then he has a purpose. He either has a son or daughter, or he's here because he knows who I am. Before I assumed the second option I looked around the room.
I was already standing, waiting for the speaker to call my name so that I could walk across the stage. There were 8 or 9 people in front of me. As the line got shorter I felt threatened. I didnt see anyone who looked like this man anywhere around the room, yet he was there. Now there were two more people in front of me. I looked straight ahead.
"Jasmine carter" was called and she walked across the stage.
i zoned out again, and thats when it happened. The boy in front of me looked around and nodded to the crazy man. They looked just alike. It had to have been his son.
"Jalil collins" was the name called, and he walked across the stage.
I was in a panic. I'd seen this boy around the school a few times, we didnt have any classes, but I always had the strage feeling I knew him. Now I knew why. He was the son Of the man who killed my parents.
"Destiny Crane" I walked across the stage as people cheered and took more pictures. I didnt take my eyes off him though. I had to be sure that my mind wasn't getting the best of me today.
About an hour later the ceremony was over and Jalil walked over to the man and gave him a hug. I knew then that My assumptions were correct.
Now you may be sitting there thinkin, "what does any of this have to do with your story?". Well little do you know, it has everything to do with it. For years I wondered what Would I do if I ever saw this man again. When I finally saw them together it all made sense. I knew what I could do to make sure my parents had their revenge through me. My plan was to date his son, get to know his dad a little more, make both of them adore me, and then kill his father when i'd gained his trust.
Its been two years since graduation, and I'm finally about to put that plan in motion. My birthday is in two weeks and Guess who's invited to the party.
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| On March 31st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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This story sounds great. Kmp plz |
| On March 31st 2008 Equasha Said : | |
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sounds great...plz keep me posted |
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kmp |
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this story seems interesting kmp |
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Comment & Rate Plz!!! |


