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The mystery of the dark hall!
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As I walked through the dark hallway, I could feel it getting closer. Bump! Bump! Bump! My heart pounding so fast, I could not hear anything else. I walked to the end of the hall, and all of a sudden something pushed me. As I rolled down the stairs I could see something, but i could not quite make it out. It was a shadow. When I got to the bottom of the stairs, the shadow was gone. Suddenly I herd a big scream. When I got upstairs nobody was there. Who could it have been? So then I went back down stairs, to get the phone. I dailed 911 but they did not seem to believe me. When I sat the phone down it rang. "Hello, hello" but nobody answered. I walked away, and it rang again. Hello I said. A creepy voice answered, "Have you checked the children yet." I dropped the phone and ran upstairs. I ran in to my brother and sisters room but they were not there. As my mind went in to shock I ran down stairs. They were in the kitchen getting a drink. I sent them back to bed. I walked back down the hallway, and this time i herd something so i ran in my room and locked the door. I sat on my bed, as I looked around scaredly. The door handle started moving back and forth. When it stopped I opened it to see if he was still there. Nobody was there, so I turned around in big relief and shut the door, as I was starring him right in the eyes.
Comments
| On March 20th 2007 babyroo222 Said : | |
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umm kinda sounds like a movie but its pretty good! ☺ lol nice |
| On February 17th 2007 laceydogdog Said : | |
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ummm
that kinda sounds like the movie wen a stranger calls........ |
| On February 17th 2007 casey0827 Said : | |
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it was alright but i think your poems are better. |
| On February 9th 2007 bowmank Said : | |
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i can make another chapter if you want i am making a book about it |
| On February 6th 2007 Charmedrocks Said : | |
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It is awesome |
| On February 5th 2007 mv4life Said : | |
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nice.and please make a sequel to it.it was very good. |
| On February 4th 2007 Wes555 Said : | |
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I'm torn between if this story sucks or if its good... it sucks cuz its sort of a cheap knock off of When a stranger calls but it's also good at the same time cuz at the end you actually meet him and yet that also MIGHT have been taken from the movie so i'd say a thumbs.... DOWN!!! |
| On February 4th 2007 qweenbitch Said : | |
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nice but wat happens next i need to no plzzzzz mk another one |
| On February 4th 2007 Chelsea12093 Said : | |
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wow continue it i want to see what happens to her i loved it awesome story!!!=D |
| On February 4th 2007 AmandaBolton Said : | |
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this book is alsome |


