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Creative Created on 7-25-08 Views(73) Story Rating PG

"Well we can go see a movie or go shopping or maybe go to six flags" david says getting out or the shower

"How about shopping or maybe we could just stay home and maybe... Well just never mind" i say

"Wait what were you going to say?" he asked looking at me funny

"Nothing its not important. Lets go shopping." i say

"Are you sure it was nothing? The mall it is. What car you want to take?" he says still looking at me

"Yours duh" i say grabbing his keys, my purse, and my phone.

"Can i drive?" i ask

"Sure go ahead swetty" he says

"Yay" i say kissing him

"Can we go now?" i ask

"Yes we can. Ill be down in one sec." he says

"Okay ill wait for you" i say walking out

"okay babe" he says

I walk down to the green viper to see a blue paper in the whiper blade. Saying to my Dearest Kelly, Im sorry for what i did to you. Also for the way i treated you. But most of all im sorry for hitting you. Im going to go start rehab today. Im not saying i want to get back with you again. Im just saying i want to be friends. And by no mean am i mad a david for haveing you. Hes a better man then ill ever be. Here is the number for the rehab center: 303-197-0435. Call me please kelly. We need to talk. Love always and forever Brett Good. I shoved the letter in my bag and started the car. david walked outside and got in the car.

"Are you ready to go to the mall?" i ask

"Yes" he says

"Can we go to macy's first?" i ask

"Anything you want my love" he says

i smile thinking to myself hes trying way to hard.

"So what took you so long?" i ask

"Jason called me and wanted to be in my life again. and i told him i didnt want nothing to do with him anymore" he says

"Oh" i say knowing somethings up and hes lieing to me.

We arrive an the mall. I get out and grab my purse and leave the phone in the car. He takes my hand and kisses me and we walk into macy's.

"So what are you looking for?" he asked

"A nice baby blue sundress and a pair of black flats or heals." i say back

"Okay." he says

After shopping for like 30 mins in macy's i find 4 different colered sundresses and two different black flats and a pair of black heals.

"Are you going to try them on" he asked

"No im just going to buy them" i say

We pay and leave.

"Lets go where you want to now" i say

"How about hot topic" he says

"Sure i love that place" i say

we walk in hot topic hand in hand and i go look at bags and pants i dont know where he went. After shopping in hot topic for like 30 mins i find david and have in my hand 3 pair of skinny jeans, make-up, and something for david. we pay and leave

"Are you ready to go eat?" i ask

"Yes if you are"

 

 *do you like it so far? tell me how to make it better? if you want to sorry it short i didnt have time to write more i wanted to get back to chating. ♥ kelly*

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On July 26th 2008 Sarwa123 Said :
Sarwa123 first off, love the idea of the story its going well but a bit of advice, less talking, explain more about whats happening you still want some talking but not that much. good luck xD
On July 25th 2008 BleuPoison21 Said :
BleuPoison21 Its really good kmp
On July 25th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said :
Andy2Anomaly Ok a small bit of advice, it kinda rambles a lil bit, try to get a lil more detail in. But it's really great :D