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Journey from earth to hell part 7

Fiction Created on 10-13-07 Views(20) Story Rating G

Back in the room...

<knock knock>

"Come in",said Blaze.

The fat guy that they had met earlier entered with the food that they had ordered.

"Thank you.",said Blaze.

"Uh i almost forgot, you have been chosen in our lucky draw and will receive free service throughout so please enjoy yourself.",said the fat guy.

"Oh thanks mister....",said Blaze.

The fat guy went away and Blaze shut the door behind him.

"Hey did you notice that we're in room number 666?",said Alana.

"What? really? hmm i really didn't notice that,"said Blaze.

"Oh well it';s your turn to take a bath now.",said Alana.

"OK, see in you in a while.",said Blaze.

"Yeah ofcourse.",she said and started laughing.

Blaze took his clothes and entered the huge bathroom. It was as large as his parent's and his room combined back in Detroit. Blaze looked around a little more and when he was finished admiring it he started deciding whether he should take a shower or go into the tub. Then he finally decided to go into the tub. He started the water and waited. After it was full enough to sink in, he took off his clothes and got in. He also got his rubber ducky and started playing with it.

After he was done he got out, wiped himself dry with a towel and put on his other clothes. He was just about to get out when he noticed that his mom's credit card was inside the tub.

"Huh, how did that get there?",he said.

"Did you say something Blaze?",Alana said from outside the bathroom.

"No nothing.",he said.

"Oh OK.",she said.

Blaze went to take the credit card and once he leaned to down to get it he felt as if a huge vaccum was pulling him inside the tub drain. Blaze felt that this was because of the tireing journey but once he couldn't get out, his facial expression changed.

"ALANA HELP!!",he shouted.

"WHAT HAPPENED!",she shouted from outside.

"JUST GET IN AND HELP ME WILL YOU!!",he bellowed.

Alana kicked the door open and was rooted to the spot when she saw Blaze. Blaze's arm had totally disappeared into the drain, it was as if a really fascinating optical illusion was taking place.

"HEY WHAT ARE YOU STANDING THERE FOR! HELP ME OUT HERE!",he shouted.

"huh! oh yeah!",she came to help Blaze get out but as soon as she touched his arm, her arm got in too and both of them were getting sucked in.

"This is the wierdest thing that has ever happened to me!",he said.

"Well yeah, it's not hurting or anything but it feels hot on the other side.",she said.

"Well what are we gonna do now!",he said.

"I think that we should just wait and get sucked in.",said Alana quite calmly.

"HUH!? WHAT ARE YOU SAYING! HAVE YOU GONE MAD OR SOMETHING!?",he shouted at her thinking that she had lost her nut.

"Well don't you think that this place has been wierd from the start.",she said,"It's as if this was all planned by someone just to get us till here. I think that there is something on the other side that will help us to learn more about this place and then we can do something about it."

Blaze didn't say a thing but just stayed shut.

Maybe she was right after all. Maybe this place was wierd and someone desperately wanted them or 'him' to get here and do something.

Everthing that had happened after he got out of his house in Detroit was wierd. You don't ever see things like this happen everyday. Maybe he was just dreaming and as soon as he would get past that drain, his mom would wake him up saying that it was getting late for school.

"This isn't a dream Blaze, you can pinch yourself if you don't believe it.",she said. She had obviously read his mind.

"Well seems like one.",he said and pinched himself.

"OW!",he screamed,"Guess you're right"

"See I'm always right",she said and gave a wide smile.

By this time the hole had grown bigger and half their bodies were sucked in already.

"This is taking a lot of time don't you think."said Blaze.

"Yeah well they probably thought that we would be stuggling right now and that would be fun to watch.",she said and both of them laughed at the disappointment of the people who had lured this trap.

"WILL YOU GUYZ MAKE THIS QUICK, WE HAVEN'T GOT ALL DAY YOU KNOW!",he shouted at the drain that was pulling them inside.

"Shouting won't help you know. You have to be patient some times.",said Alana.

"Yeah well this is really slow you know! If there is anything that I really need to know is on the other side of the drain so I'm a bit impatient.",he said.

"Well we're almost there now just a little bit more.",she said.

Alana was right. Now only their heads were visible and every other part of their body was sucked inside.

"Well here goes. Whatever you are on the other side better be interesting or I'll make you pay for making me wait so impatiently.",said Blaze and slowly their whole heads were sucked inside......

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On October 13th 2007 Lonelygurl222 Said :
Lonelygurl222 wow i love it keep me posted!