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T-w-i-s-t-e-d : Ch. 2 - Questions (revised)
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"Damn it, Donna! Get Your ass down here!"
I slammed my book, Eclipse by Stephenie Meyer, down on my bed and grudgingly walked out of my bedroom, pushing aside the sheet that served as my door and only means of privacy. I muttered darkly and climbed down the stairs to ask Arlene what she was yelling at or, more or less, ask what other task she needed me to perform because she didn't feel like doing it.
I found her sitting in the living room watching television drinking a beer. Arlene had died blond hair with dark eyebrows. She was missing a few teeth and wore way to much make up. Surrounding her was a thick cloud of cigarette smoke and she wreaked of way too much perfume. I have heard this particular aroma described before as smelling like a "French whore house". I had to stand a few feet away from her in order to breath without coughing. The amount of fragrance spray she wore was stifling. Arlene was my foster mom.
I'm sure not all foster parents were as disgusting as Arlene is. I'm sure most really care about the children they take in and provide for them as best they can. Arlene, well, she didn't. She was an out of work beautician who lived off the government checks she got for housing a bunch of orphans like me.
At that moment Tommy, a 9 year old who I could swear was the spawn of Satan, came running past me in his underwear screaming at the top of his lungs. He ran up to me and kicked me in the shin. I growled and glared at him with such ferocity he took of running in the opposite direction, screaming.
"Hey! Don't you be making Tommy scream like that! I'm trying to watch this show, damn it!" She had a house makeover show on. I kept my mouth shut and waited for her to tell me what she wanted.
"What do YOU want?" Arlene asked.
I internally rolled my eyes. "You called me down here, remember?"
"Oh right. Go take the bottles out and then get out of my hair. Shouldn't you be gettin' to work some time anyway?"
Well, if I could say one nice thing about Arlene it was that she was punctual. Well, at least when it came to getting money.
"Yeah Arlene. See you tonight," unfortunately, I added silently. I walked out the door, tugging the bag of bottles behind me. I worked down at the Walmart that was about a quarter mile from my house. I got the job courtesy of my social worker who decided having a job would help take my mind of the latest tragedy in my life. The thing about working at a check out lane was it really didn't keep your mind busy.
I was a few minutes early. 17 minutes to be exact. When Arlene had told me I was supposed to be at work, I knew I would be early. I was just desperate for any excuse to get out of the house and luckily enough, she provided me with one. I had time to return the bottles and get my receipt redeemed for cash.
My shift started at 5 pm and ended at 12:30 in the morning. The store shut down at midnight and we spent a half hour tidying up and sweeping.
After I had helped an elderly woman figure out how to use the Walmart credit card and finished scanning all of the tags on her groceries, my bag boy, Ian, loaded up her cart and pushed it out to her car for her. He was always doing stuff like that for people. I had no clue where he mustered up that kind of generosity, but he always did. He was a skinny teen with glasses, greasy hair, and skin problems. We were complete opposites in most ways.
Maybe that's why we became fast friends.
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| On December 2nd 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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Wow girl you have me hooked and its only been 2 chapters that ive read! |
| On December 2nd 2007 irwinwe Said : | |
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you really paint vivid pictures of characters...loved the description of arlene lol...you are very talented! |
| On November 30th 2007 onaipwolf Said : | |
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wow, that's a big revelation... |
| On August 13th 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said : | |
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still lovin it!!
keep me posted please!!
~*Jewell*~ |


