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Ayrenna |
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Last Day |
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She looks so Happy |
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Last Day
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"Are you cold?" he asked, wrapping his arm around her.
"A little," her shaky voice answered. She looked around at the view, the open valley, the grass, the wide sky of pale blue that faded to grey on the horizon. Why had he brought her there?
"Tell ya what," his muffled voice giggled from inside his bag. He reappeared with a flannel blanket and said with a cheeky look at her, "I'll let you have this, but there's a catch."
"Of course there's a catch," she sighed, propping her chin on her hand, staring into the open outdoors.
"You have to make me a promise," he said slowly and very seriously.
"And what's that?" she giggled, looking back at him. When she saw his face, she stopped and cleared her throat. "What is it?"
"You must promise to keep this a secret, just between us," he said, removing his jacket, staring at her intently.
"What? What do I have to keep a secret?"
"Nevermind," he said, shrugging it back on, sloppily handing her the flannel sheet. "I don't know if I can do that."
"Do what?" she said, snuggling up against him in his lap, nuzzling against his chest.
He shuttered and curled his arms around her, and she heard him start to cry. "No," she heard him murmur. "No-"
"What's the matter?" she asked, sitting up.
His fingers sifted through her hair, softly petting her, and he kissed her head. "You must make me this promise if you want to keep that," he said. "Can you keep it?"
"Yeah, sure. Anything," she said, curiously watching him take off his jacket again. "What are you-? Oh....my God..." she breathed.
"You can't tell anyone," he said quietly, sweeping her into his arms tighter, pressing her against him, dearly wishing he could keep her.
"I won't," she whispered to his shoulder. "They're beautiful."
He closed his eyes and shuttered again as her hand slowly caressed the shaking feathers.
"Are you cold?" she asked.
"A little bit," his shaky voice answered. "And I'm scared."
"Why are you scared? Nothing can happen now."
"For you. I can't tell you until- I don't know- Just forget it," he sighed.
"So why did you bring me here?" she asked finally.
"I wanted you to see this. It's a very special occasion...." he answered, frowning suddenly.
"Why-?"
"Don't say anything. Just relax."
"I love you," she sighed into his shoulder.
He bit his lip, and another tear fell.
"I love you, too," he said softly as his wings wrapped around her and his tears fell like rain.
I only wish you didn't have to die tomorrow
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| On June 21st 2007 bladesfire Said : | |
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Well, it's a short story, so it doesn't really matter how she knows him. lol You just assume they're well-acquainted, at the least, and go on with it. ^^ |
| On June 4th 2007 nikki44256 Said : | |
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she said '' i love you'' so how does she know him??? |
| On March 14th 2007 bladesfire Said : | |
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thank you guys!!! ^^ ok, yes, he is an angel. Note the implied wings. *pokes* okay,,,,,'ll try to write summore. Just for you guys ^^ much lurve to you all. I love it when you gimme feedback |
| On February 25th 2007 thekoolkid13 Said : | |
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WHAT?!?!?! YOU GET MY ATTENTION THEN TAKE IT ALL AWAY.....HOW MESSED UP! IS HE LIKE AN ANGEL OR SMTHING!!!! WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!! |
| On February 10th 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said : | |
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that is so pretty... i about cried.... wow. that is beautiful... |
| On February 1st 2007 bvon01 Said : | |
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I like this one!!! |
| On December 3rd 2006 bladesfire Said : | |
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^^ Thank you all for commenting! I feel so loved! lol Now, to answer your questions: He's not the angel of death. Just an angel. ^^ The part about seeing her in heaven anyways is kinda open ended. You get to guess and kinda take it where you want it to go from there. And to FlywithanAngel, this is actully a "sequel" of my other story, "She looks so happy", so I can't really give you more on this one, but you can read the "prequel" ^^ Thanks again, you guys =0D *hugs* |
| On November 30th 2006 skacoregirl Said : | |
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HE'S THE ANGEL OF DEATH! am i right? |
| On November 29th 2006 SuperFantastik Said : | |
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So, he's an angel?
Sweet, sweet.
So, she dies tomorrow...and...wait a second.
Angels...are...GAHH CONFUSING!
He can see her in heaven...unless he's a fallen angel.
Hm. |
| On November 25th 2006 FlywithanAngel Said : | |
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O.o whaa?!? thats it??!! I WANNA READ MORE!!! i like it so far^.^ |


