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HIDE and SEEK ((6))
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 Created on 2-26-08
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:SIX: Chris and Jason had been looking through the apartment for about an hour.Chris was looking in the living room when Jason called to him. “Preacher, lookie here.” Jason Amir said with enthusiasm in his voice.“What? Did you find the killer hiding under the counter?” Chris said a little jokingly. “Ha! No, but it looks like she had a visitor here.”Chris walked over to where Jason was squatting and saw the second cup. “Looks like someone knocked the cup over.” Jason said. “Yeah, it does. Hey, is that a foot print?” Chris asked.“Where? Oh, yeah I see. Looks like when they dropped the coffee cup it spilled on their shoe, making an outline of their foot.” Jason stated.“Whoa ho! Look who’s all smart.” Chris said teasingly to Jason. “Hey you’re right. Good job J.”“Ok. Therefore, we know that she had a guest, but the guest left towards the bedroom and accidentally knocked over the cup making the coffee spill on her foot leaving an outline of her shoe, See. We also know that whoever killed this woman didn’t forced them self inside the apartment. The question is what happened to our guest. Did they hide out or what.” Jason said, running over what they had so far.“Ok so we go look in the bedroom then. Ugh… I am not looking forward to this. Alright let’s find our missing guest then.” Chris said.Chris and Jason walked in the bedroom, and saw nothing unusual until Chris turned toward around. “Look, the window to the fire escape is open a bit.” Chris pointed out.“Yeah so is the window directly below it.” Jason said, getting a little excited.“Hey J, I’m going to go down there and check it out ok?”“Yeah go ahead and have all the fun snooping around where you don’t belong. I’m going to go start packing up.” Chris went out the window, went down the fire escape, and stopped a floor below Sara’s apartment. He went through the same window Leah went through and closed it as much as he could, behind him. He began looking around the somewhat empty apartment before he noticed that there was blood and the phone and near the door. He walked out the apartment and followed the little drippings of blood to a cleaning supply closet. Chris opened the Closet door to find a woman around his age laying unconscious on the ground. She had dark brown almost black hair, and she was wearing dark blue jeans and a light blue t-shirt with white tennis shoes. He walked over to her unconscious body and felt her pulse, and noticed she had a cut on her hand, but most of the blood was dried. “So you’re the little guest at the apartment, ay. Why did you come down here? Wanted to do some spring cleaning or were you just hiding?” Chris whispered to himself aloud. Chris picked up his Nextel and called Jason. “Jason here” Jason Amir answered“Jason, its Chris. I found our visitor. She’s unconscious, but I’m going to carry her down to the car so meet me there.” “Alright, I’ll me a waiting.” Chris hung up the Nextel and picked up the woman, and carried her to the elevator and out to the car where Jason was waiting with the back of Chris’ black Saturn door opened. Chris handed the woman to Jason, and climbed in the back seat of the car, and then Jason passed the woman to Chris in the back seat so that her head was lying on his hands. Chris was smoothing the woman’s hair back, away from her face, trying to get her to wake up.“Where do you want to go Preacher?” Jason asked.“Ummm… Take us to my apartment. We’ll see if we can wake her up there.” Chris replied.“Okay. If you think taking a possible whiteness to a murder to a strange mans apartment is a good idea I’m all for it.” *************************************************************** They arrived at Chris’ apartment around 3pm. “Hey, where do you want her? She’s kinda heavy.” Jason asked.“Oh yeah, put her on the couch. Oh, and your not suppose to call a woman heavy, it’s rude.” Chris told Jason with a smile on his face. Jason walked over to the black couch and put the woman on it, then walked 3 feet to the kitchen where Chris was making coffee.“Preacher… Are you sure it’s ok to have her here, I mean really what if she is the killer, huh?” Jason said, nodding over towards the couch. “I don’t think she’s the killer, or that she’s going to kill me for that matter I’m much too handsome to be murdered. Haha. Really, I think it will be alright if she could stay here a while, until she gains consciousness at least.” Chris replied, while looking over at the woman. “Alright, I’m going to head out. Don’t do anything I would do.” Jason told Chris jokingly. “Don’t worry, I won’t.” Chris said laughing. After Jason left Chris put the coffee on, then went to bandage the woman’s hand. After he finished, he took out a book from the bookshelf, sat down across from the woman, and began to read.
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