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Johnny

Johnny

Creative Created on 10-14-06 Views(58) Story Rating G

it was halloween and johnny had just got done trick or treating. all his friend we're on their way home and in a moment he was all alone. as he was walking home he realized that he was being followed by mitch and roger the school bullies. johnny began to run but mitch and roger we're still following him. finally they caught up to him and began to beat him up til he lost consciousness. moments later johnny regained consciousness and started walking. when he got home he found his parents and his siblings all crying. he asked what was wrong but he didnt get an answer. finally his father said, "kids go to your room." and so they did. curious to what was going on johnny decided to eaves drop on his parents' conversation. "they took our baby away from us tom! they took johnny". it was then that johnny realized he was already dead. mitch and roger had killed him.

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On December 12th 2006 tashaedwardsis Said :
tashaedwardsis sorry but it didn't ut me there when they were beating him. What was going through his head, what did his siblings say. What was his costume. was it a clear night, or stormy? Don't tell me, show me!
On October 16th 2006 Kirstyk Said :
Kirstyk cmon, you cant just leave it at that, paint me a picture, when johnny got home was he bloody? give more into the parents convo, show thier sadness with words.